Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I remember when I was in the fifth grade. It was the first time I wrote a story and I felt invincible. It didn't matter if it made sense to anyone other than me. I applaude the creativity of your daughter. I'm sure I don't need to say this but keep encouraging her. Gretchen

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023

I love that!! I thank you for your applause, and send it right back!
<3

Comment from Sarah Das Gupta

Excellent

The picture is wonderful and most suited to the poem! You obviously have a budding writer on your hands. As a teacher, over the years, I have found so much potential in children!

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023

Thank you so much, Sarah! Yes, the brilliance of innocence is a thing to behold <3 clearly you are a wonderful teacher!

reply by Sarah Das Gupta on 10-Mar-2023

All best wishes!

Comment from karenina

Excellent

Hurray! A creative mind must run in the family!

How great that she is encouraged and supported in her efforts!

Save them all! They are treasures, for sure.

Karenina

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023

Thank you so much! They truly are <3

reply by karenina on 10-Mar-2023

I have boxes of treasures!

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

So very true, Mystery Writer!
And how wonderful for you to sing the creativity of your daughter and share with readers her delight in writing stories! May she forever continue her passion, and may NO ONE every destroy her passion and gift...

Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023

Your kind words are so appreciated!! Thank you very much. :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I so agree and when my Granddaughter writes, her imagination astounds me and your words here are spo on, I enjoyed your 10 word poem for the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023

Thank you, Dolly!

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Thanks for sharing your daughter's artwork and the notes.
-It is always nice when our children are creative.
-You wrote a good poem with your ten words.
-A good message and effective rhyme.
-I agree that there is "treasure in the young writer's mind."
-A good entry; good luck!

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023

Thank you, Pam!

Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

There certainly is. A very good message. Just a slight correction, there perhaps should be a space between these two words, "writer's mind." It appears they run together, although it may just be the font. Nice poem, lovely artwork by your daughter which gives your poem a very personal touch. Jacqueline

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023

Thank you for your lovely review! There wasn't a space, so may have been the font. I changed it, thank you for letting me know!

reply by JT traveller on 08-Mar-2023

Have a great day 😊🇦🇺

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent teen word poem
with the nice addition of the rhyme and a good message to match.
Wonderful art work choice.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert

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 Comment Written 08-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023

Thank you so much, appreciate your feedback !

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Love this! Your daughter is well on her way to becoming a writer. Excellent two line poem that speaks the truth. So much treasure in a young mind. We need to encourage young minds like you are doing with your daughter.

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 Comment Written 08-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023

Thank you so much! Your words mean the world to me!