Red Skeletons
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Death Will be your Bliss "Haunting Poetry for the Darkness in us all
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Comment from Lea Tonin1
Very interesting poem! Very spooky and colorful picture too wow! I like the way your rhyming is set up is definitely different quite interesting subject matter was definitely a wake up and pay attention kind of thing. If I'm not mistaken you might be talking about suicide which is a deal breaker break a. Deal? With god boy do that.
But it could be wrong I'm not like the way off base. Having said that I find your phone to be insightful and written by a talented hand and I thank you so much
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Very interesting poem! Very spooky and colorful picture too wow! I like the way your rhyming is set up is definitely different quite interesting subject matter was definitely a wake up and pay attention kind of thing. If I'm not mistaken you might be talking about suicide which is a deal breaker break a. Deal? With god boy do that.
But it could be wrong I'm not like the way off base. Having said that I find your phone to be insightful and written by a talented hand and I thank you so much
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much. There was a time in my life where the thought crossed my mind, but I have worked through it and found my way to a better place.
Comment from JT traveller
Great description of a narcissist. Well conceived poem. Good meter. For me it seemed more free style despite the lines rhyming.
A dark but engrossing poem. I wish there was more. Excellent work. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Great description of a narcissist. Well conceived poem. Good meter. For me it seemed more free style despite the lines rhyming.
A dark but engrossing poem. I wish there was more. Excellent work. Jacqueline
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you.
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My pleasure 😊
Comment from patcelaw
This is quite a good rhyming poem for the contest I do wish you the very best in the contest. I do hope you will have a wonderful day, and that it will be blessed.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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This is quite a good rhyming poem for the contest I do wish you the very best in the contest. I do hope you will have a wonderful day, and that it will be blessed.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Being indifferent to another person's feelings is the worst death one can feel in a relationship as it is cruel and harsh and means it is truly dead, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Being indifferent to another person's feelings is the worst death one can feel in a relationship as it is cruel and harsh and means it is truly dead, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Yes, it is.
Comment from Kaiku
The first line of the last stanza; a bit of sarcasm? You did well to bring rhyme into play through lines 1-1, 2-2, 3-3. I'm not a rhyming person but it seems this pattern can be a bit tricky. The emotion stayed consistent throughout. Nice piece for the prompt.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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The first line of the last stanza; a bit of sarcasm? You did well to bring rhyme into play through lines 1-1, 2-2, 3-3. I'm not a rhyming person but it seems this pattern can be a bit tricky. The emotion stayed consistent throughout. Nice piece for the prompt.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you.
