Vader
He'll find your lack of treats disturbing17 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Very clever one. I like the words, and love the image of the beautiful dog. With his strength, the force would be stong, so clever play with words. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Very clever one. I like the words, and love the image of the beautiful dog. With his strength, the force would be stong, so clever play with words. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much, Wendy!
Comment from jacquelyn popp
Great contest entry. Good luck in the contest. Very nice picture that went well with your poem. Very well written. I too have pets and I love them . Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Great contest entry. Good luck in the contest. Very nice picture that went well with your poem. Very well written. I too have pets and I love them . Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much! They're easy to love, that's for sure <3
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
Lovely picture! The poem suggests his strong character and that 'the force' is with him! The poem is short but you have succeeded in conveying much of his character!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Lovely picture! The poem suggests his strong character and that 'the force' is with him! The poem is short but you have succeeded in conveying much of his character!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Sarah!
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All best wishes!
Comment from royowen
It seems dogs have a great influence in our lives, the affect of how they can affect one's routine is really quite incredible, this is a good entry in this pet 5/7/5 poetry contest, well done, blessings Roy
Suggestion, the force, it's strong, (you don't drop articles)
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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It seems dogs have a great influence in our lives, the affect of how they can affect one's routine is really quite incredible, this is a good entry in this pet 5/7/5 poetry contest, well done, blessings Roy
Suggestion, the force, it's strong, (you don't drop articles)
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much, Roy! I'm gonna take a look, that's a good suggestion!
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Most welcome
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Well done
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This dog looks strong and adventurous, also focused and loving, your loyal dog is a Star Wars fan here as his force is with him, I enjoyed your cleverly selected words for the contest, I reckon this one is a winner, may the force be with you, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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This dog looks strong and adventurous, also focused and loving, your loyal dog is a Star Wars fan here as his force is with him, I enjoyed your cleverly selected words for the contest, I reckon this one is a winner, may the force be with you, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Dolly!! <3
Comment from Julie Lau
What a beautiful dog Vader is, and your words have a slow, measured flow which absolutely suits your subject. I hope to read many more of your haikus on FS. Yours,
Julie Lau
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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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What a beautiful dog Vader is, and your words have a slow, measured flow which absolutely suits your subject. I hope to read many more of your haikus on FS. Yours,
Julie Lau
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Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much, Julie!
Comment from Nicki Nance
Well, hello, Vader. Your presentation in Yoda's dialect is brilliant. Your regard of his love, loyalty, and strength makes him important to the reader, as does the photo.
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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Well, hello, Vader. Your presentation in Yoda's dialect is brilliant. Your regard of his love, loyalty, and strength makes him important to the reader, as does the photo.
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Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Nicki! I appreciate your catch on Yoda, the most! :)
