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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A wonderful faithful write about your personal relationship with your own faith and how it makes you feel supported and loved. I wish you luck with the contest Wendy I reckon this is a winner, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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A wonderful faithful write about your personal relationship with your own faith and how it makes you feel supported and loved. I wish you luck with the contest Wendy I reckon this is a winner, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thank you Dolly. I feel very encouraged by your thoughtful review. (The contest has just finished and it came second.)
Wendy
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Congratulations Wendy x
Comment from w.j.debi
This is a beautiful declaration of your faith. The metaphors of the seed, rope, boat and clay are interwoven well into the theme of your message. Nice end rhymes.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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This is a beautiful declaration of your faith. The metaphors of the seed, rope, boat and clay are interwoven well into the theme of your message. Nice end rhymes.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much. I am so pleased you like this one.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
A very good well thought out and well written poem. He is full of faith and hope and validation and devotion. The picture you've chosen is lovely and serene and only relaxes the mind.
I find it to be beautifully written. I don't see a problem with flow or subject matter or word choice or anything it's quite delightful.
You have a very good submission for which I am quite happy to have read and wish you the best of luck!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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A very good well thought out and well written poem. He is full of faith and hope and validation and devotion. The picture you've chosen is lovely and serene and only relaxes the mind.
I find it to be beautifully written. I don't see a problem with flow or subject matter or word choice or anything it's quite delightful.
You have a very good submission for which I am quite happy to have read and wish you the best of luck!
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Many thanks for your lovely review, thoughtful and thorough. Appreciated.
Comment from royowen
This is one of the best faith poems I've ever seen I think, at least in my memory. Oh yes indeed, He doesn't really expect anything more than we can give, and He knows exactly how much that is. We shouldn't be questioning too much, children don't, and that's the measure. Beautifully written, in more or less articulate couplet pentameter sestets, well done, good luck, blessing Roy
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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This is one of the best faith poems I've ever seen I think, at least in my memory. Oh yes indeed, He doesn't really expect anything more than we can give, and He knows exactly how much that is. We shouldn't be questioning too much, children don't, and that's the measure. Beautifully written, in more or less articulate couplet pentameter sestets, well done, good luck, blessing Roy
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your lovely review and affirmation. So glad you enjoyed it.
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Most welcome
Comment from Mintybee
I really liked this poem, full of images of small things that aspire to be more. I like that it focuses on God, not on self. I like that you look past our earthly attempts at faith and hope to a fulfilled faith and hope at a later time. I think this was a really good poem of faith.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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I really liked this poem, full of images of small things that aspire to be more. I like that it focuses on God, not on self. I like that you look past our earthly attempts at faith and hope to a fulfilled faith and hope at a later time. I think this was a really good poem of faith.
Mintybee
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much! I really appreciate your insightful review.
Comment from Marienkiefer
Nicely crafted pome giving insight to faith, the inroads into faith and how faith grows.
-fresh, new, on same line could possibly be perceived as an echo in your poem.
-Lovely imagery and diffusions of faith-s light, as candle versus lighthouse and God-s light.
Best of luck on this writing prompt. Wishing the best for you.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Nicely crafted pome giving insight to faith, the inroads into faith and how faith grows.
-fresh, new, on same line could possibly be perceived as an echo in your poem.
-Lovely imagery and diffusions of faith-s light, as candle versus lighthouse and God-s light.
Best of luck on this writing prompt. Wishing the best for you.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful review. Much appreciated.
