Comment from lancellot

Excellent

I would think the last thing he thought would be why am I yelling instead of running out of the way? But I see the irony of the story. One never knows when the end will come or how, no matter how your life goes.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2023

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Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Great 100 word contest entry.

This is a serious issue. I was rear ended and knocked in pin opus by a texting teenager. A few years later, my mom and kids were hit by a man who apologized because he was texting. My daughter ended up in the hospital.

Thanks for putting some light onto the issue.

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 Comment Written 04-Mar-2023

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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Ironic? Yes. You did a great job with your contest entry,
Mystery Author. You set the scene well and ended it on
a tragic note. You gave readers much information in your
100 words. The picture was perfect.
Thanks for sharing and vest wishes in the contest, Jan

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 Comment Written 04-Mar-2023

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