Untethered Kite
Adrift in the wind45 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Jesse, This is a very well written poem from your heart about your caregiver, Cindy. I am so very sorry to hear her diagnosis. You both will be in my prayers. How are you doing besides that? Blessings, Teri
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Jesse, This is a very well written poem from your heart about your caregiver, Cindy. I am so very sorry to hear her diagnosis. You both will be in my prayers. How are you doing besides that? Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 04-Mar-2023
Comment from rspoet
Hello Jesse,
You've captured the feeling of loss very well in your poem;
untethered in the swirling winds of change can be very frightening.
It will likely take time for her to adjust, and your self as well.
Hopefully, her condition will improve. One of my neighbors had
a brain aneurysm and is now doing fine.
Best wishes and extra stars to both of you.
Robert
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Hello Jesse,
You've captured the feeling of loss very well in your poem;
untethered in the swirling winds of change can be very frightening.
It will likely take time for her to adjust, and your self as well.
Hopefully, her condition will improve. One of my neighbors had
a brain aneurysm and is now doing fine.
Best wishes and extra stars to both of you.
Robert
Comment Written 04-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Good morning, Robert.
I am honored by your sixth star and your captivating review. Thank you for getting the gist of my feelings. Thanks for sharing about your neighbor and how she is doing fine, even though she had the same condition as Cindy.
Thanks for your good wishes, and have a wonderful day!
Jesse
Comment from w.j.debi
I am sorry to hear about your caregiver. Hopefully, she can recover quickly and be as supportive of you as ever. It sounds like you are doing the best you can to support her.
For the writing--the untethered kite is an excellent metaphor for how you are feeling.
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I am sorry to hear about your caregiver. Hopefully, she can recover quickly and be as supportive of you as ever. It sounds like you are doing the best you can to support her.
For the writing--the untethered kite is an excellent metaphor for how you are feeling.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2023
Comment from Douglas Goff
Sorry to hear this. Prayers for you and her. Your sentiments were really heartfelt and caring.
Hopefully there is something they can do. God bless. D
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Sorry to hear this. Prayers for you and her. Your sentiments were really heartfelt and caring.
Hopefully there is something they can do. God bless. D
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2023
Comment from LateBloomer
Oh Jesse, this is such sad news for both you and Cindy, your caregiver. I know how important it is to have the "right" caregiver during recovery.
I leave this prayer for you and Cindy:
Dear Lord, place your loving hands on Cindy's head.
Remove her aneurysm, so that she may care for Jesse
during in his recovery. I ask of this in Your name. Amen.
Jesse, I'm so sorry that you are going through this. I also pray that God will send you a well-matched caregiver once more. We must believe.
A poem from the heart. Well done. Thank you for sharing pieces of your life with us. Margaret ~ LB
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Oh Jesse, this is such sad news for both you and Cindy, your caregiver. I know how important it is to have the "right" caregiver during recovery.
I leave this prayer for you and Cindy:
Dear Lord, place your loving hands on Cindy's head.
Remove her aneurysm, so that she may care for Jesse
during in his recovery. I ask of this in Your name. Amen.
Jesse, I'm so sorry that you are going through this. I also pray that God will send you a well-matched caregiver once more. We must believe.
A poem from the heart. Well done. Thank you for sharing pieces of your life with us. Margaret ~ LB
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2023
