Mind your business
Poor Rosie..36 total reviews
Comment from Kaiku
did you hear it from her diary or were you being nosey and read it from her diary. Yes, you ventured into notes that were none of your business and a bit of truth came up and bit you in the a.... Good luck in the prompt.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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did you hear it from her diary or were you being nosey and read it from her diary. Yes, you ventured into notes that were none of your business and a bit of truth came up and bit you in the a.... Good luck in the prompt.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Haha thank you!
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Comment from Brandon Clark
Irony....lol. Excellent job on this. You have the syllables and sarcasm - like a hammer - and its very funny; I really enjoyed it!
Best of luck in the contest,
Brandon
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Irony....lol. Excellent job on this. You have the syllables and sarcasm - like a hammer - and its very funny; I really enjoyed it!
Best of luck in the contest,
Brandon
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thank you, so glad you liked it!
Comment from Sherry SG
This was hilarious with the irony well built into the situation described. It has the correct syllable count. I also like the effortless rhyme. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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This was hilarious with the irony well built into the situation described. It has the correct syllable count. I also like the effortless rhyme. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much, Sherry!
Comment from Ricky1024
"Mind Your Business" was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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"Mind Your Business" was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much!
Comment from lancellot
Ha. That second line caught me by surprise. Yes, the sarcasm and irony are clear in the one. Well done. Funny too. I like rhyme and near rhymes too. Good idea to add that.
I wish you well in the contest.
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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Ha. That second line caught me by surprise. Yes, the sarcasm and irony are clear in the one. Well done. Funny too. I like rhyme and near rhymes too. Good idea to add that.
I wish you well in the contest.
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thank you, I really appreciate that!
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Haha!! Funny! I like it!
Ever thought about writing for comic strips I think you'd be a shoe in!!
Very inventive and I really enjoyed it! Did you do the picture? It's great work!
I'm sure you know that as a reviewer they want you to look for something that needs improvement well guess what I can't find anything so Green light for all things funny!!
Thank you so much for this there's a good laugh and I really great submission hope you have a good night!
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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Haha!! Funny! I like it!
Ever thought about writing for comic strips I think you'd be a shoe in!!
Very inventive and I really enjoyed it! Did you do the picture? It's great work!
I'm sure you know that as a reviewer they want you to look for something that needs improvement well guess what I can't find anything so Green light for all things funny!!
Thank you so much for this there's a good laugh and I really great submission hope you have a good night!
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thank you so so much, Lea!
