Mind your business
Poor Rosie..36 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Jessica,
Yep, that is a problem, but you capably created a verse for this innovative poem format. Do like your mini alliteration in your first line. (Diary too?)
Best of luck in the voting.
Mark
P.S. Consider adding a space before or after your hyphen to give it a more pronounced twist.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Jessica,
Yep, that is a problem, but you capably created a verse for this innovative poem format. Do like your mini alliteration in your first line. (Diary too?)
Best of luck in the voting.
Mark
P.S. Consider adding a space before or after your hyphen to give it a more pronounced twist.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much!! Will absolutely take that suggestion, thank you!
Comment from Mary Shifman
I don't know anything about the Landay type of poetry, but this poem is clever and creative. It gave me a good laugh. I've known a few people like this in my time.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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I don't know anything about the Landay type of poetry, but this poem is clever and creative. It gave me a good laugh. I've known a few people like this in my time.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much! And yes, same.. a few too many!
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You are welcome. I hope you win!
Comment from royowen
Hehehe. Just love this, I wonder if we were to encounter, accidentally of course, someone's diary, particularly if we knew them well, what we would do, read it, or not, oh heck, why not, nobody will know...beautifully written, good luck, well done blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Hehehe. Just love this, I wonder if we were to encounter, accidentally of course, someone's diary, particularly if we knew them well, what we would do, read it, or not, oh heck, why not, nobody will know...beautifully written, good luck, well done blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Roy!! Means a lot! <3
Jessica
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Well done
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hahaha... good landay, it's pretty funny.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Hahaha... good landay, it's pretty funny.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much, Gypsy!
Comment from Janet Foor
Mind your own business is always excellent advise.
Poor Rosie. She was just curious and we all know what killed the cat.
Fun poem and good luck.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Mind your own business is always excellent advise.
Poor Rosie. She was just curious and we all know what killed the cat.
Fun poem and good luck.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much! Poor Rosie, indeed.
<3
Comment from Paul McFarland
That's a good one, Jessica. That's a tough prompt, but you should do well in the contest.
You're not nosey, Jessica, I'm sure.
The motive for your reading her diary were pure.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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That's a good one, Jessica. That's a tough prompt, but you should do well in the contest.
You're not nosey, Jessica, I'm sure.
The motive for your reading her diary were pure.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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I appreciate your feedback! :)
If blame, it?s on Rosie?s hiding, Paul.
Found it just after five minutes of snooping, that?s all!
Comment from rjuselius
Hahahaa. This is an entertaining piece of poetry dear Jessica! I like the sarcastic sentiment. This fits the bill properly.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Hahahaa. This is an entertaining piece of poetry dear Jessica! I like the sarcastic sentiment. This fits the bill properly.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much Rebekka!!!
Comment from Thesis
Lol. You've humorously shown that Rosie was right on point to classify the girl as being nosey. Hmmm, and how did she hear it from Rosie's diary? Case closed!
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Lol. You've humorously shown that Rosie was right on point to classify the girl as being nosey. Hmmm, and how did she hear it from Rosie's diary? Case closed!
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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lol thank you so much!!
Comment from nomi338
Point made. Score one for Rosie. We are often convicted, not by what we say, but by what we do. Our actions are always directed by what we think, what we believe, revealing who we really are inside.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Point made. Score one for Rosie. We are often convicted, not by what we say, but by what we do. Our actions are always directed by what we think, what we believe, revealing who we really are inside.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Well said!! Thank you so much!
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Jessica,
This person is hiding from the truth here. I like the sarcasm. Of course she is nosy if she is reading someone else's diary.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Hi Jessica,
This person is hiding from the truth here. I like the sarcasm. Of course she is nosy if she is reading someone else's diary.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thank you! :)
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My pleasure, Jessica.
Joan
