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Poor Rosie..36 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Congratulations for you can count;
obviously a necessity for a Landay
Hey Adrian! Look, I wrote a Landay, too
Following the instructions, I took it upon myself to see if I could. and did.
Should I enter it into the contest?
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Congratulations for you can count;
obviously a necessity for a Landay
Hey Adrian! Look, I wrote a Landay, too
Following the instructions, I took it upon myself to see if I could. and did.
Should I enter it into the contest?
Comment Written 04-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Bravo!
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That's it, Bravo?
You simply do not know how hard it is for me to write anything shorter than 100 words.
Just kidding.
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Sorry, Tom, loved it so you should know..
Landay and calling me out, to both I say.. bravo!?!
Comment from G0dd0ll
O MY! lol This was so cute I had to say something. It depicts our own arrogance and then slaps you in the face with a glove, doesn't it! lol Very cute. I liked it.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2023
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O MY! lol This was so cute I had to say something. It depicts our own arrogance and then slaps you in the face with a glove, doesn't it! lol Very cute. I liked it.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2023
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Thank you thank you!! :)
Comment from Ric Myworld
As I've often said, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. But even an untrained ear can read and enjoy the rhyme, meter, and verses they can't write. To be touched my another's sensitivities.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2023
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As I've often said, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. But even an untrained ear can read and enjoy the rhyme, meter, and verses they can't write. To be touched my another's sensitivities.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Haha....This is a great entry to the Landay contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and funny as heck. Instead of writing you are hearing this from her diary. It would be better saying your read this in her diary. Diaries don't talk. Secondly, it seems more intrusive if you are actually reading her private writings. The visual is just okay. A cartoon of a woman reading a book would fit perfectly. Good luck in the contest.Yours was the best I am voting for you.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2023
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Haha....This is a great entry to the Landay contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and funny as heck. Instead of writing you are hearing this from her diary. It would be better saying your read this in her diary. Diaries don't talk. Secondly, it seems more intrusive if you are actually reading her private writings. The visual is just okay. A cartoon of a woman reading a book would fit perfectly. Good luck in the contest.Yours was the best I am voting for you.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much. I truly appreciate that, Sandra!
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You are welcome. Your entry should be in the top 3.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Yep, diaries tell us a lot. This usually holds secrets to one's life. The thing is, we should never read someone's diary unless it solves someone's case or mystery. Evidently, the writings were tempting to read. To be nosey is not a good characteristic.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2023
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Yep, diaries tell us a lot. This usually holds secrets to one's life. The thing is, we should never read someone's diary unless it solves someone's case or mystery. Evidently, the writings were tempting to read. To be nosey is not a good characteristic.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2023
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Agreed. Thank you!
Comment from Wendy G
Very sarcastic, and witty too. Seems to meet the requirements! Made me smile. Appropriate image as well! I like your clever entry and wish you well for this contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Very sarcastic, and witty too. Seems to meet the requirements! Made me smile. Appropriate image as well! I like your clever entry and wish you well for this contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much!
Comment from PoemsOfDD
I LOL on this short read of a Landay poem. A very good sarcastic comeback. I did wonder on the - hearing it from her diary - as opposed to - reading it from her diary. Either way, same effect. A clever entry. Hope you win :-)
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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I LOL on this short read of a Landay poem. A very good sarcastic comeback. I did wonder on the - hearing it from her diary - as opposed to - reading it from her diary. Either way, same effect. A clever entry. Hope you win :-)
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is very amusing. Secrets certainly can be learned by invading someone's privacy by reading her diary. Obviously, the sneak has lived up to her reputation.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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This is very amusing. Secrets certainly can be learned by invading someone's privacy by reading her diary. Obviously, the sneak has lived up to her reputation.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Precisely! Thanks so much for your review
Comment from Faith Williams
Your short little poem made me laugh. The audacity indeed! I have not seen this type of poem before, and your syllable count follows the instructions. It seems like it's a fun one. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Your short little poem made me laugh. The audacity indeed! I have not seen this type of poem before, and your syllable count follows the instructions. It seems like it's a fun one. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thank you!! Definitely fun, I find myself often trying to think of more now..
Comment from jessizero
This was very cute and funny, not to mention unexpected. I don't know too much about this Landay thing, but I like this one. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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This was very cute and funny, not to mention unexpected. I don't know too much about this Landay thing, but I like this one. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much!
