The Performance
Alliteration Body Count contest entry37 total reviews
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
This is really different - I like it! As the words are stacked one on top of another, the pace is quick, fluid movement just like your ballerina. I'm not sure why it's called alliteration, it looks like repeating ABC stanzas.
Whatever it is, it's beautifully presented, and you did a great job of lining up the alphabet. Bravo! And good luck:-)
Pam
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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This is really different - I like it! As the words are stacked one on top of another, the pace is quick, fluid movement just like your ballerina. I'm not sure why it's called alliteration, it looks like repeating ABC stanzas.
Whatever it is, it's beautifully presented, and you did a great job of lining up the alphabet. Bravo! And good luck:-)
Pam
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Pam. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Boogienights
Very well done, you effectively used all of the alphabet and told a story that made sense. Not an easy challenge, but one you have succeeded in completing. Best if luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Very well done, you effectively used all of the alphabet and told a story that made sense. Not an easy challenge, but one you have succeeded in completing. Best if luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the great review and good luck wishes, Boogie. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was very well done! I followed the words down as if they'd been written in a story. Which it did. To do it using every letter of the alphabet, in such a way that you don't notice it, is quite an accomplishment. I think you have a winner here! Good luck! Sandra xx
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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That was very well done! I followed the words down as if they'd been written in a story. Which it did. To do it using every letter of the alphabet, in such a way that you don't notice it, is quite an accomplishment. I think you have a winner here! Good luck! Sandra xx
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Sandra. I really appreciate the kind comments and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Wow really a job! Excellent work and love the picture Beautiful and superior all around really good.
There is no doubt you know exactly what you're doing and at the end of your pen comes beauty...
I very much admire this work your effort is flawless !
And you got through the entire alphabet that makes you the master hands down!
Really good read and a real contender for this contest!! Thank you for sharing have a great night!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Wow really a job! Excellent work and love the picture Beautiful and superior all around really good.
There is no doubt you know exactly what you're doing and at the end of your pen comes beauty...
I very much admire this work your effort is flawless !
And you got through the entire alphabet that makes you the master hands down!
Really good read and a real contender for this contest!! Thank you for sharing have a great night!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for the excellent review, Lea. I'm glad you liked the piece. Might you have any suggestions on how to improve it? When it has a four star rating, that means that adjustments are needed. Any suggestions are welcome.
I really appreciate the kind comments. Have yourself a great night as well.
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So sorry they took away my option to hit 6 so my thing looks funny and I hit the wrong button I bumped you up to the excellent stage
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a clever alphabet write with wonderful descriptions of this dancer and you brought her movement to life here and I enjoyed this poem very much, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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This is a clever alphabet write with wonderful descriptions of this dancer and you brought her movement to life here and I enjoyed this poem very much, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the kind review and gracious stars, Dolly. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Ricky1024
"The Performance" as if done with a simple dance was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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My Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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"The Performance" as if done with a simple dance was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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My Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Dr. Ricky. I really appreciate the generous stars, kind comments and good luck wishes, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from JT traveller
Just brilliant. Wonderful. Do you mind if I share this with my friend? A ballet teacher and former dancer.
Expertly composed and a thoroughly enjoyable read.
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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Just brilliant. Wonderful. Do you mind if I share this with my friend? A ballet teacher and former dancer.
Expertly composed and a thoroughly enjoyable read.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Yes, please do. That would be awesome. Thank you for the fantastic review, JT. I really appreciate the generous stars. Glad to see you jumped on as a fan. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Sure did, how could I resist? Have a great day. Jacqueline 😊
