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Be on the Watch

Fairy power at work.

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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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This is such a sweet abc poem and you didn't have to use odd words to make it. I'd give you a six if I had any left. I love the images you paint with words and the picture is pretty good. too.

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 Comment Written 18-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
    Thanks, Carol, for your review, comments, and six-star intention. I appreciate it all. I felt fortunate to find that illustration.
    Have a great evening.
Comment from JT traveller
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A romantic, well composed poem. I had no idea that it was an ABC poem until I came across the notes at the end. It could just as easily have been written as a free verse poem.

Great colour scheme and an equally idyllic illustration to accompany your words.

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 Comment Written 18-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
    Thanks, JT, for your review and all the stars.
    I see what you are saying about the poem working just as well as free verse. I was too deep into writing it to see that--good observation.
    Yes, I felt very fortunate to find that illustration.
    Thanks again.
reply by JT traveller on 18-Feb-2023
    My pleasure. Jacqueline