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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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This is six worthy. I really hope somebody has one left, or not just somebody but many somebodies. You told an emotional story rich with descriptions. I really wish this knight would have expressed his love. How sad. This is a perfect package.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
    Thank you, Barbara, nobody has given me a six for this one, I don't even have too many reviews. I think a lot of fanstorians look for poems that pay well. Anyway, I am happy you reviewed it. You are very kind.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by barbara.wilkey on 17-Feb-2023
    If that' true, they're missing one of the best poets on this site. So sad.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
    Thank you, Barbara, you are very kind.
Comment from aryr
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Wow, this was spectacular, Gypsy. I really enjoyed the title and the dual picture. It was definitely was a knight then you introduced the death reaper. This was interesting to say the least. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs!

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much for reading my poem and the excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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It's too bad that he never confessed his "undying love" as he takes extreme measures to die along with his loved one.

the porcelen alabaster skin (porcelain)
rises his sword to the Grim Reaper (raises)

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
    Thank you, big sister, I corrected the errors.

    I have been watching Games of Thrones and House of Dragons. So many knights ... LoL some in love of the queens they served.

    Love you, big sister ((*=*))

    MariVal
Comment from patcelaw
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I did enjoy this one very much. Your presentation is super, and the wording is wonderful. I wish for you a pleasant evening and a good tomorrow. Patricia

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much for reading my poem and the excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs