Hindrance
The betrayal of neglect and false promises13 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Being betrayed is one thing and how we react to it is quite another and we often blame ourselves when we are innocent and it leaves us with all the feelings you describe here, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2023
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Being betrayed is one thing and how we react to it is quite another and we often blame ourselves when we are innocent and it leaves us with all the feelings you describe here, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your comment and feelings shared.
Cheers, Dolly!
Jess
Comment from JT traveller
Your eyes craving ignorance to not see the truth. Fabulous word combination. So powerful.
Vivid imagery and your message of betrayal is clear.
A great piece of writing. I wish you all the best in the competition.
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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2023
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Your eyes craving ignorance to not see the truth. Fabulous word combination. So powerful.
Vivid imagery and your message of betrayal is clear.
A great piece of writing. I wish you all the best in the competition.
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Comment Written 09-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for your review and for taking the time to point out what you specifically enjoyed. It is truly SO important to me <3
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My pleasure. We are all here to learn from each other. Jacqueline 😊
Comment from Douglas Goff
What a great entry for the Betrayal Poetry contest. Poetry is supposed to illicit emotion, and this one made me feel, tired, dreary, and . . .desperate. Nice work!
I will certainly look for this one in the voting booth.
Keep up the great work, Master Poet!
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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2023
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What a great entry for the Betrayal Poetry contest. Poetry is supposed to illicit emotion, and this one made me feel, tired, dreary, and . . .desperate. Nice work!
I will certainly look for this one in the voting booth.
Keep up the great work, Master Poet!
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Comment Written 09-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2023
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Truly, I am honored by your words. Thank you so much for this comment!
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Very good job!
