Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Excellent one line poem with an internal rhyme that fits the poem. One can see a worm squirm, so your use of words is perfect. This poem fits me sometimes as well.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023

I've had my "squirmy" moments as well.
In those times, I take comfort in God's true comment to Israel: "Fear not you worm Jacob, I will help you," God bless you, Dennis

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is absolutely hilarious one-liner. I do hope that you don't squirm too much. When you read the reviews said you're going to get with this. May you have a good day and God bless. Patricia

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023

Thanks Pat! I seem to remember an applicable verse I have run to from time to time: "Fear not, you worm Jacob, I am your God, and I will help you"!

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I think there's a little bit of Jacob in all of us dear friend Dennis. I can remember someone once told he believed God told him his heavenly, after God telling him he didn't really want to hear it, he was very sad at the heavenly name, "but
Lord haven't I...?" Well done Dennis, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023

Thanks brother Roy. I seem to remember an applicable verse I have run to from time to time: "Fear not, you worm Jacob, I am your God, and I will help you"!

reply by royowen on 09-Feb-2023

Yep I was thinking of the same verse, my real-time dad didn?t call me that, but I?m sure he thought it sometimes Dennis, bless you

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023

Thanks, Roy

reply by royowen on 09-Feb-2023

Most welcome