What A Sunday Evening Service!
Based on John 20:19-234 total reviews
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Dennis,
It's good to see you're back. I loved the poem, but as you've already heard, it was hard to read. If it had been from someone other than you, I might have skipped it, but I know your work, and I wasn't disappointed. Well done my friend. Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Hello Dennis,
It's good to see you're back. I loved the poem, but as you've already heard, it was hard to read. If it had been from someone other than you, I might have skipped it, but I know your work, and I wasn't disappointed. Well done my friend. Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 09-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Thanks brother, your encouragement is very much appreciated. Oddly enough, it showed fine on my screen with white background and black print. God bless you, brother, Dennis
Comment from patcelaw
Dennis, this is a very good writing that you have done about Jesus and that Sunday evening after he arose. The only problem that I have with this is that you have put the background in such a light color that your words which are also in a light color do not appear. You may want to change the background to a darker color so that the lighter colored font will appear. I think that many people would not read this because of the way that you have presented it. Patricia.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Dennis, this is a very good writing that you have done about Jesus and that Sunday evening after he arose. The only problem that I have with this is that you have put the background in such a light color that your words which are also in a light color do not appear. You may want to change the background to a darker color so that the lighter colored font will appear. I think that many people would not read this because of the way that you have presented it. Patricia.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your kind comments and helpful suggestions, but on my screen it is white background and black print??? Will try to do better, God bless.
Comment from JT traveller
All in all an enjoyable poem.
Just a couple of minor suggestions. The colour scheme of your poem made it extremely difficult to read.
"In that dread hour." Perhaps dreaded?
Only a few suggestions.
Otherwise, an enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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All in all an enjoyable poem.
Just a couple of minor suggestions. The colour scheme of your poem made it extremely difficult to read.
"In that dread hour." Perhaps dreaded?
Only a few suggestions.
Otherwise, an enjoyable read.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Thank you, for your kind comments and helpful suggestions. I will try to rectify.
God bless.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A well rhymed and worded poem about the Easter celebration and I enjoyed your interpretation of evens here and how lovely that you enjoyed this service, a magical write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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A well rhymed and worded poem about the Easter celebration and I enjoyed your interpretation of evens here and how lovely that you enjoyed this service, a magical write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Well, enjoyed only vicariously, as I am indeed old, but not old enough to have actually been there on the eve of Christ's resurrection. :)Thank you for reading and commenting. God bless.
