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Worm World

a fifty-word story

16 total reviews 
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Exceptional
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Haha. Did you say that our rulers are worms? You are so right. They are worms with tiny brains. This is so funny that I will give you a six stars.

Excellent.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
    Thanks, Lisa, for the great review. Bill
Comment from lyenochka
Excellent
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Oh-oh. Hmmm intelligent alien pasta! How will humans fight back?? Or maybe they were all subjugated so they wouldn't know that they were ruled by worms...

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
    I'm going to vote Democrat.
reply by lyenochka on 07-Feb-2023
    AOC vs MTG. I think we need people who really care about government and drop parties altogether. Everyone should run Independent!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
    Pete Buttigieg
reply by lyenochka on 07-Feb-2023
    Yay for Pete! And how about Liz Cheney? The one Republican who didn't compromise her morals!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
    I'll buy that.
Comment from Sugarray77
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Ewww Bill, I can't stand worms and have never wanted to touch one. You did a great job and the artwork is so vivid and eye catching that it really makes an impact. :)

Melissa

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
    You are wise to not touch them, Melissa. Not a great experience.
Comment from BethShelby
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So did that start as as people and the long trip cause they to die and only worms were left to rule the earth? If that isn't the case those worms must be a lot smarter than our local worms.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
    I haven't seen any worn intelligence tests, so I am only guessing, Beth.
Comment from jmdg1954
Good
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Okay. Reading this verbatim I follow the storyline. It makes no sense to me.
Vermicelli are pasta noodles. How or why did they explode? Why are they suddenly word taking over earth?
I'm lost... please explain.
John

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 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
    Vermicelli is Italian for worms. The pasta is named after worms. No, Italy did not explode.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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With everything that seems to be hovering over us that we don't seem to know anything about until it's cross half the world, we may have already been infested with a Chinese worm epidemic. LOL. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
    Thanks, Ric. They just need some wiggle room.