Comment from Kaiku

Exceptional

very good. It is something I would have liked to write. A bit dark but reigns true for many. This prompt should do very well. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023

Thank you so much for the six stars I am so honored.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Jealousy is riddled with revenge and horror, gossip and venomous traits. Your write is scary and full of fear here, a fine post for the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023

Thank you

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective images and word choices in the opening lines.
-Very good use of personification in the last line,
showing impact the darkness has.
-A good entry; good luck!

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023

Thank you

reply by Pam (respa) on 13-Feb-2023

You are welcome.

Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

Fantastic entry for the 2-4-4-12 competition.

Great choice of topic and powerful imagery, enhanced by your silhouetted illustration.

I wish you the best of luck

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023

Thank you

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent 2-4-4-12 poem for the contest
with very good imagery of the dark theme.
I like the word choices: venom, malice, possessed
and the scary laugh, like a very bad nightmare.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023

Thank you