Interstate
a 5-7-515 total reviews
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Great image and perfect fit for the words.
I guess folks better pack a picnic lunch this drive might take a while.
I hope I've interpreted the poem correctly.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
Great image and perfect fit for the words.
I guess folks better pack a picnic lunch this drive might take a while.
I hope I've interpreted the poem correctly.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Thanks, Shirley. I hear Nirvanaville is a neat place.
Comment from ESOSTINE
I am not sure I really understand this poem, I would rather relate it the complexity of our network of roads, getting more confusing the more you attempt to describe it to a stranger. Well done, Bill.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
I am not sure I really understand this poem, I would rather relate it the complexity of our network of roads, getting more confusing the more you attempt to describe it to a stranger. Well done, Bill.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thanks, Esostine
Comment from BethShelby
This is very funny thank to the picture you have illustrating it. I've been on such confusing roundabouts. There was one in New Orleans I thought I'd never find my way off of. Where is Nirvanaville? Is that near Buddaville or it that the place where rock bands perform?
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
This is very funny thank to the picture you have illustrating it. I've been on such confusing roundabouts. There was one in New Orleans I thought I'd never find my way off of. Where is Nirvanaville? Is that near Buddaville or it that the place where rock bands perform?
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Nirvana I?ll is an easy-off/easy-on exit off Highway to Heaven.
Comment from nomi338
Can I just take the bus and sleep on the way? Something tells me I am going to need all my strength when I get there. You see I have to see a horse about a man, who looked down the horse's mouth and then he bought a pig in a poke, and ran away with a dish and a spoon.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
Can I just take the bus and sleep on the way? Something tells me I am going to need all my strength when I get there. You see I have to see a horse about a man, who looked down the horse's mouth and then he bought a pig in a poke, and ran away with a dish and a spoon.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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You must be over the moon.
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I am, I am!
Comment from Spitfire
Wouldn't that be something. Certainly, this chaotic world needs a peaceful destination where people could experience bliss again. Nice rhyme with take and interstate.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
Wouldn't that be something. Certainly, this chaotic world needs a peaceful destination where people could experience bliss again. Nice rhyme with take and interstate.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thanks, Shari
Comment from Sugarray77
Yes, your artwork looks nervy. LOL. Your short and succinct 5-7-5 plays off the art and gives us a smile. Very creative, Bill, very creative. :).
Melissa
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
Yes, your artwork looks nervy. LOL. Your short and succinct 5-7-5 plays off the art and gives us a smile. Very creative, Bill, very creative. :).
Melissa
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
Normally, I would say this is the kind of driving directions that I could understand but now I realize this is an ekphrastic poem and the directions require being maybe higher than on the interstate.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
Normally, I would say this is the kind of driving directions that I could understand but now I realize this is an ekphrastic poem and the directions require being maybe higher than on the interstate.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Super highway!
Comment from kahpot
Finding Nirvana, many people would have turned many times and still missed it, not on any maps that I have seen, very well written, your humor rules****kahpot
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
Finding Nirvana, many people would have turned many times and still missed it, not on any maps that I have seen, very well written, your humor rules****kahpot
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you, kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am assuming this place is imaginary Bill? A place we would all love to visit though, I enjoyed the fantasy and your inventiveness here. A fun post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
I am assuming this place is imaginary Bill? A place we would all love to visit though, I enjoyed the fantasy and your inventiveness here. A fun post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thanks, Dolly
Comment from Brandon Clark
I've looked for this darn off ramp so many times and still haven't found the blessed thing...lol. I got close in Missouri or Kentucky or some such state once, or so I thought, as I drove through the small nearly deserted town and passed by Floyd's Barber Shop...but didn't look too inviting, so I carried on! I think it was a good choice. Nice job!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
I've looked for this darn off ramp so many times and still haven't found the blessed thing...lol. I got close in Missouri or Kentucky or some such state once, or so I thought, as I drove through the small nearly deserted town and passed by Floyd's Barber Shop...but didn't look too inviting, so I carried on! I think it was a good choice. Nice job!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Mayberry, North Carolina.