Taste of My Reality
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Comment from JT traveller
Lovely meter. You write very well Ricky.
This were my favourite lines,
"I would lasso each and every Falling Star.
Collect each and every one in a "Glasstein Jar""
A light and heartfelt read.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
Lovely meter. You write very well Ricky.
This were my favourite lines,
"I would lasso each and every Falling Star.
Collect each and every one in a "Glasstein Jar""
A light and heartfelt read.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Trying but soon all will see?
Exactly what's been going through me?
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from royowen
I was wondering what a Glastien jar, unless it was the brand nana me of the artwork bottle/jars on didplay Ricky? But although some of the deserts in Australia are fairly big a hot, I would opt for water, well dine, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
I was wondering what a Glastien jar, unless it was the brand nana me of the artwork bottle/jars on didplay Ricky? But although some of the deserts in Australia are fairly big a hot, I would opt for water, well dine, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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I made up my own words now for many, many years. I sometimes will put in the edit of notes what it is. A glass game jar is just something that's a container that can hold tremendous about of light.
Thank Roy,
Doctor Ricky
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Thanks for explaining
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a very interesting poem, almost Victorian at some points. To follow Jesus, that should be our quest. Thank you for sharing this with us. It's very good and I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
This is a very interesting poem, almost Victorian at some points. To follow Jesus, that should be our quest. Thank you for sharing this with us. It's very good and I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you Barbara. When I was writing this I wasn't thinking on the presents or preference of Victorian but I'll go with that!
Doctor Ricky
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A flowing and poetic piece. The list of hyperbole reads almost like a Victorian love poem. The language is varied and the narrative stays on point.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
A flowing and poetic piece. The list of hyperbole reads almost like a Victorian love poem. The language is varied and the narrative stays on point.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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I've actually never researched Shakespeare's work but if you want to give me the Victorian touch for this love poem.
Much appreciated. Dell's worth. .
Thank you!
Doctor Ricky