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Comment from lyenochka
I like the comparison of the those amorous fireflies to a "sea of brilliant stars." The moonbeams also allude to the romance of the moon and its influence on the mating of teeming things.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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I like the comparison of the those amorous fireflies to a "sea of brilliant stars." The moonbeams also allude to the romance of the moon and its influence on the mating of teeming things.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much, big sister. It's good to hear from you. Live you.
Marival ❤️
My sister is back at the hospital, could you pray for her,?
Gypsy hugs
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Okay! Will pray for her!!
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Thank you! I am so worried about her, she keeps going back to the hospital.
She sounds very positive, though.
Love you ❤️
Comment from Jasmine Girl
The moonbeam was created by a bug, how funny. He was spying on the amorous dance by fireflies. Your Tankas are very good, very expressive and poetic.
Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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The moonbeam was created by a bug, how funny. He was spying on the amorous dance by fireflies. Your Tankas are very good, very expressive and poetic.
Well done.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much, my friend. It's good to hear from you. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Comment from oliver818
I enjoyed reading this poem, it has a nice flow and lovey imagery. I particularly enjoyed the last line about the amorous fly. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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I enjoyed reading this poem, it has a nice flow and lovey imagery. I particularly enjoyed the last line about the amorous fly. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This Tanka poem really does live up to its brief as it evokes wonderful imagery. The twinkling lights of the lively firefly that remind us of shooting stars in the depths of the night. It makes me wonder if the stars can be considered to be amorous. Much enjoyed. kay
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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This Tanka poem really does live up to its brief as it evokes wonderful imagery. The twinkling lights of the lively firefly that remind us of shooting stars in the depths of the night. It makes me wonder if the stars can be considered to be amorous. Much enjoyed. kay
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. With tanka you can use personification. It's a poetic idea, not factual.
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Comment from Janilou
Beautiful poem and the artwork is a perfect match. Wow. I enjoyed the visual images this conjured in my mind as I read your words.
All the best,
Jan
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Beautiful poem and the artwork is a perfect match. Wow. I enjoyed the visual images this conjured in my mind as I read your words.
All the best,
Jan
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Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Your exceptional review means a lot to me. Thank you very much, Jan. Have a wonderful weekend!
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Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Gypsy!
Oh my goodness! What a well-crafted tanka!
Such exquisite imagery!
Sensual, descriptive, breathtakingly beautiful...
Thank you for sharing!
diane
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Hello, Gypsy!
Oh my goodness! What a well-crafted tanka!
Such exquisite imagery!
Sensual, descriptive, breathtakingly beautiful...
Thank you for sharing!
diane
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Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Your exceptional review means a lot coming from you. Thank you very much, Diane. Have a wonderful weekend!
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Comment from Mary Shifman
That is a gorgeous poem and the art is lovely, too. I'm glad I save one six star because you deserve it. I've always loved watching fireflies and this brings back fond memories. I've seen very few for the last few years;.
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That is a gorgeous poem and the art is lovely, too. I'm glad I save one six star because you deserve it. I've always loved watching fireflies and this brings back fond memories. I've seen very few for the last few years;.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Your exceptional six stars review means a lot coming from you. Thank you very much, Mary. Have a wonderful weekend!
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You are welcome.
