One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Mark Schardine
It can seem strange to see a lonely person doing nothing but writing. Of course, such a person can feel most free to express most powerful emotions, with no fear of what readers will say.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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It can seem strange to see a lonely person doing nothing but writing. Of course, such a person can feel most free to express most powerful emotions, with no fear of what readers will say.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much, Mark. As always, your kind and insightful reviews are deeply appreciated.
Gypsy
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, in just a few lines you wrote a beautiful tribute to a beloved poet. Your poem reads and flows well and has good sensory appeal.
Of special note:
poured his bleeding heart
over tattered pages
(Good imagery. In my mind, the poet was dipping his quill into his splattered blood and writing with it.)
Well chosen photo. Beautiful presentation. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Hi Gypsy, in just a few lines you wrote a beautiful tribute to a beloved poet. Your poem reads and flows well and has good sensory appeal.
Of special note:
poured his bleeding heart
over tattered pages
(Good imagery. In my mind, the poet was dipping his quill into his splattered blood and writing with it.)
Well chosen photo. Beautiful presentation. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your your naani poem- good picture presentation as usual- excellent flow - poem paints a clear picture of an old poet - bleeding heart- putting his heart and soul into his creations - with passion - pages -saturated with love and country- good use of metaphors!!! Good job. AP
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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I like your your naani poem- good picture presentation as usual- excellent flow - poem paints a clear picture of an old poet - bleeding heart- putting his heart and soul into his creations - with passion - pages -saturated with love and country- good use of metaphors!!! Good job. AP
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much, my friend. It's good to hear from you. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem Gypsy....and one that sums up the writer's experience quite nicely, I don't compare to his caliber of writing----not in his league----but the principle's exactly the same
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Another fine poem Gypsy....and one that sums up the writer's experience quite nicely, I don't compare to his caliber of writing----not in his league----but the principle's exactly the same
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much, Pam. I appreciate your kind review and the time you spent reading it. Happy Weekend!
Gypsy hugs
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm sure many poets have felt this way as they attempted to write that one poem that will be perfect. I know I have struggled writing certain scenes that I feel must convey the message I want it to. Thank you for accurately describing this struggle.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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I'm sure many poets have felt this way as they attempted to write that one poem that will be perfect. I know I have struggled writing certain scenes that I feel must convey the message I want it to. Thank you for accurately describing this struggle.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate your kind review and the time you spent reading it. Happy Weekend!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ricky1024
This 25 word Naani speaks out and cries in pain and shame
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
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"The Mule"
The "Mule" is now on the back of Humanity.
People whom are mortally injured but mentally, pay a high price for continued Existance.
These are the few but many...
These are the ones whom cry so plenty...
The tears lead to and through a trail of Endless pains and shames...
Rape...
Thievery...
Desolation across this fine but hurting Nation.
God, when we I'll the violence ever end?
Thanks for sharing this and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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This 25 word Naani speaks out and cries in pain and shame
...
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
...
"The Mule"
The "Mule" is now on the back of Humanity.
People whom are mortally injured but mentally, pay a high price for continued Existance.
These are the few but many...
These are the ones whom cry so plenty...
The tears lead to and through a trail of Endless pains and shames...
Rape...
Thievery...
Desolation across this fine but hurting Nation.
God, when we I'll the violence ever end?
Thanks for sharing this and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much, Ricky. I appreciate your kind review and the time you spent reading it. Happy Weekend!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
Another beautiful read and poem, writing about love can be hard though this work shows how wonderfully it can be done, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Another beautiful read and poem, writing about love can be hard though this work shows how wonderfully it can be done, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much, Kym. I appreciate your kind review and the time you spent reading it. Happy Weekend!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Some thought Bard was the real Shakespeare. With all that candles, it looks like he worked with hard. We work hard, too at the Fanstory. Love the presentation.
Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Some thought Bard was the real Shakespeare. With all that candles, it looks like he worked with hard. We work hard, too at the Fanstory. Love the presentation.
Well done.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Thank you, I appreciate your great review and kind feedback. I'm happy you like it.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
It is the poet who feels the deepest and it makes sense that the pages of his writings are "saturated with love and passion." The love of country these days makes me think of how much division there is in the world because loving one country sometimes means hating another and that's so sad.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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It is the poet who feels the deepest and it makes sense that the pages of his writings are "saturated with love and passion." The love of country these days makes me think of how much division there is in the world because loving one country sometimes means hating another and that's so sad.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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No, it's not about division in America... it's about my mother country... but I guess you know that. I've been thinking about Spanish poet's lately and I found out they write about tragic love stories like I do...so it's a Spanish thing. LoL
Thank you, big sister, love you.
Marival ❤️
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Every once in a while, piece you post hits all the right notes for me, but that being said I remain frustrated not knowing how you input those pictures at the bottom of every submission. Instruct me please.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Every once in a while, piece you post hits all the right notes for me, but that being said I remain frustrated not knowing how you input those pictures at the bottom of every submission. Instruct me please.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Tom. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind feedback. I'm happy you like it.
Gypsy hugs
