As Evening Wanes
Nature 5-7-511 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
You creatively crafted a beautiful poem. The word lullaby grants the feeling of peacefulness. The picture compliments your poem. Together they make an awesome combination.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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You creatively crafted a beautiful poem. The word lullaby grants the feeling of peacefulness. The picture compliments your poem. Together they make an awesome combination.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from Karyn2
"twilight's lullaby" is a beautiful choice of words here. I adore the title of this 575 too! Lovely sprinkle of alliteration, nature them, descriptive word choices and you have created a really wonderful entry to the contest. Best Wishes.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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"twilight's lullaby" is a beautiful choice of words here. I adore the title of this 575 too! Lovely sprinkle of alliteration, nature them, descriptive word choices and you have created a really wonderful entry to the contest. Best Wishes.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you karen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A beautiful scene painted here of colour before the scene turns to darkness as the sun sets. Or this could be the sunrise as the colour first shows itself behind the shadow of darkness, either way, this is a magical write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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A beautiful scene painted here of colour before the scene turns to darkness as the sun sets. Or this could be the sunrise as the colour first shows itself behind the shadow of darkness, either way, this is a magical write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you Dolly.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Beautiful picture and well-chosen words to describe it. Twilight is such a beautiful time of day, helping us to wind down and prepare for the night. Good entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Beautiful picture and well-chosen words to describe it. Twilight is such a beautiful time of day, helping us to wind down and prepare for the night. Good entry for the contest.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thank you Anne!!
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You are welcome
Comment from Val Crisson
This one of the better poems in the contest. It has a lovely flow for such a short poem, and the presentation is wonderful. Good use of alliteration in the first line. You definitely set a mood on sunsets. Good luck
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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This one of the better poems in the contest. It has a lovely flow for such a short poem, and the presentation is wonderful. Good use of alliteration in the first line. You definitely set a mood on sunsets. Good luck
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thank you Val!!
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is a great entry for the 5/7/5 Nature Contest. I really like your picture and think a light colored background that matched the photo might enhance this a bit.
Regardless, it is a good piece of work.
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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This is a great entry for the 5/7/5 Nature Contest. I really like your picture and think a light colored background that matched the photo might enhance this a bit.
Regardless, it is a good piece of work.
D
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thank you Douglas
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a beautifully stated Nature 5-7-5 entry. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and can be seen in the visual. This entry is easily understood. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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This is a beautifully stated Nature 5-7-5 entry. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and can be seen in the visual. This entry is easily understood. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I like the alliterations in lines one and two, then the simple closure of line three. Both "purple" and "distant" are ways to describe the mountains - a nice lullaby you have written. Good luck in the contest.
Pam
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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I like the alliterations in lines one and two, then the simple closure of line three. Both "purple" and "distant" are ways to describe the mountains - a nice lullaby you have written. Good luck in the contest.
Pam
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review!
Comment from patcelaw
And this writing you have painted a lovely picture in my mind of what a beautiful sunset can be at the waning of a day. Good luck in the contest Patricia.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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And this writing you have painted a lovely picture in my mind of what a beautiful sunset can be at the waning of a day. Good luck in the contest Patricia.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review!
Comment from jessizero
"Twilight" is such a lovely word and the event is just as lovely. I liked your "dust the distant mountains" phrase. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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"Twilight" is such a lovely word and the event is just as lovely. I liked your "dust the distant mountains" phrase. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thanks so much Jess!!
