SWEETLY Served Seduction
Loving intimately.................16 total reviews
Comment from FieryRoseFountains
Sandra,
This poem once again shows your prowess of imagery and description that holds the reader spellbound.
I could feel the intense intimacy conveyed through your words, topped with sprinkles of sassy.
Incredible job.
FRF
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Sandra,
This poem once again shows your prowess of imagery and description that holds the reader spellbound.
I could feel the intense intimacy conveyed through your words, topped with sprinkles of sassy.
Incredible job.
FRF
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for your generous comments and rating.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Whoa! That's pretty damn HOT for a dignified black woman! I had to throw some ice on my overheated self! Great job! I can see why it did so well, you little minx! Xoxo
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Whoa! That's pretty damn HOT for a dignified black woman! I had to throw some ice on my overheated self! Great job! I can see why it did so well, you little minx! Xoxo
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Woman. you are way behind in your reading. This was the spice for you and Bob on V-DAY! Thanks for the extra star. It's appreciated.
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I so am! I've been caught up with a real estate deal.
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Enjoy! It's deserved.
Comment from karenina
Your poem is sweetly seductive, perfectly passionate...and come on, let's face it, with this song accompanying, who n earth would not be in the mood for some soft and tender cuddles and more! Congratulations on standing in the winner's circle with this one! Whoo! Sizzling!
Karenina
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Your poem is sweetly seductive, perfectly passionate...and come on, let's face it, with this song accompanying, who n earth would not be in the mood for some soft and tender cuddles and more! Congratulations on standing in the winner's circle with this one! Whoo! Sizzling!
Karenina
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much Mrs.K. for your supportive review.
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You are most welcome!
Comment from Aussie
Sometimes simple is best. Great presentation. Doesn't get bogged down with heaps of words that isn't necessary. You create a scene of love on the boil. I liked it very much. K xx
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Sometimes simple is best. Great presentation. Doesn't get bogged down with heaps of words that isn't necessary. You create a scene of love on the boil. I liked it very much. K xx
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Love on the boil...what a great line for a love poem. Thanks for your review.
Comment from jaded831
I enjoyed your poem, it had a romantic feel, yet had a playfulness. The red against the black gave your poem a special touch. Topped with a romantic picture a beautiful presentation.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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I enjoyed your poem, it had a romantic feel, yet had a playfulness. The red against the black gave your poem a special touch. Topped with a romantic picture a beautiful presentation.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from lyenochka
I like the sweetness of the affections described here especially "feel like filling a sweet twosome wish." Great use of alliteration straight from the title! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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I like the sweetness of the affections described here especially "feel like filling a sweet twosome wish." Great use of alliteration straight from the title! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from ESOSTINE
The poem is quite creative, natural and unforced. The romance therein is what many can easily relate. Very well done. Thanks for sharing your inspiration, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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The poem is quite creative, natural and unforced. The romance therein is what many can easily relate. Very well done. Thanks for sharing your inspiration, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from royowen
I think when young we've all been in that place when one's passions run away with one, it's only in the cold light of day that we know the journey wasn't quite where we were going, but beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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I think when young we've all been in that place when one's passions run away with one, it's only in the cold light of day that we know the journey wasn't quite where we were going, but beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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There are couples after being together for years who still love each other with passion. Not the young passion but a more mature version of it. Thanks for the review.
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That?s me
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Lucky man.
Comment from JT traveller
Erotic, emotional and heartfelt all at once. Excellent composition. The colour scheme and choice of illustration really set your words off. I loved reading this.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Erotic, emotional and heartfelt all at once. Excellent composition. The colour scheme and choice of illustration really set your words off. I loved reading this.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much.
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😊🙏
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your poem - excellent picture presentation and colorful format - good seductive story line (pads? - suggest "lobes") poem is easy to follow - good progression describing intimate steps - lobes, chin, chest -touch -fingers tracing ,- smell, (unwashed, no deodorant or cologne) foreplay - poem flows well. Good Job AP
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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I like your poem - excellent picture presentation and colorful format - good seductive story line (pads? - suggest "lobes") poem is easy to follow - good progression describing intimate steps - lobes, chin, chest -touch -fingers tracing ,- smell, (unwashed, no deodorant or cologne) foreplay - poem flows well. Good Job AP
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Haha...Paul you are a hoot. I agree lobes is better and I will be changing it now. Thanks for the great review!
