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Once Upon A Time

A pairing in mutual attraction is concluded.

3 total reviews 
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I saw a meme once that said, 'The most beautiful curve on a woman's body is her smile.' I have a feeling you'd agree. I enjoyed reading and good luck.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
    Lady barbara.wilkey: Apt indeed! From a toothy young girl's to a remarked adult's, our Susi's smile was especially remembered. Thanks for stopping by with the gracious comments and stellar gift. Fantasist
Comment from jessizero
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I love the juxtaposition of the description and the one-line poem. The beginning and end are the same, with a kiss. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
    Lady jessizero: Thank you for the kind words and stellar gifting. They are appreciated. Live long and write well, Fantasist
Comment from JT traveller
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Beautiful composition. The writing conveys so much in so few words. Very cleverly executed. A great contender for the competition. I wish you the best of luck.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
    Lady Jacqueline Thomson: Noted, what I believe to be the French spelling for Tom's son. Thank you for the attention, kind words and a stellar display in my behalf. Live long and write well, Fantasist
reply by JT traveller on 31-Jan-2023
    My pleasure.