Past Memories
Four stanzas62 total reviews
Comment from Laurie Holding
I just love your work. Probably your biggest fan. You make rhyming seem so natural, not trite as I've read in others' work, and this one has the special twist of that last line of every stanza holding the same rhyme. Beautiful piece. Thanks as always for this coffee break.
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I just love your work. Probably your biggest fan. You make rhyming seem so natural, not trite as I've read in others' work, and this one has the special twist of that last line of every stanza holding the same rhyme. Beautiful piece. Thanks as always for this coffee break.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
Comment from Anne Johnston
Your poem speaks to my heart. As we get older, we have so many memories that flow through our minds. How nice to be able to sort them out, remember the good and toss away the back.
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Your poem speaks to my heart. As we get older, we have so many memories that flow through our minds. How nice to be able to sort them out, remember the good and toss away the back.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
Comment from Janet Foor
Memories are grand and your sweet poem sparked some wonderful memories for me.
Very nice rhyme and beautiful imagery.
Well done Jay.
Blessings
Janet
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Memories are grand and your sweet poem sparked some wonderful memories for me.
Very nice rhyme and beautiful imagery.
Well done Jay.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
Comment from susand3022
Hi Jay,
How nice this is to have... all of your best memories close to hand.
We like to cover our walls with all of our family and favorite moments.
Have a great day, enjoy your memories!
Susan :)
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Hi Jay,
How nice this is to have... all of your best memories close to hand.
We like to cover our walls with all of our family and favorite moments.
Have a great day, enjoy your memories!
Susan :)
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
Comment from estory
I like the use of this somewhat unusual aaabb rhyme scheme. It has a nice rocking rhythm to it, and your images of the hazy fog in the trees is perfect for creating this sense of the old memories hazily coming to light in memory. Sorting the good from the bad is something else that we all do with memories. estory
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I like the use of this somewhat unusual aaabb rhyme scheme. It has a nice rocking rhythm to it, and your images of the hazy fog in the trees is perfect for creating this sense of the old memories hazily coming to light in memory. Sorting the good from the bad is something else that we all do with memories. estory
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
Comment from jaded831
I enjoyed your lovely poem. It sparked good, old memories and some bad ones. Your rhyme scheme added a special touch, which gave your poem a smooth feel.
God bless and have a wonderful day.
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I enjoyed your lovely poem. It sparked good, old memories and some bad ones. Your rhyme scheme added a special touch, which gave your poem a smooth feel.
God bless and have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
Comment from Ricky1024
"Past Memories" was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional, while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky
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"Past Memories" was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional, while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
Comment from pome lover
well, a 6 for you!
I smiled through the whole thing - loved your meter and your words - much deserving of All Time Best. I love the first two lines of the third verse, especially. Very pleasurable!
Katharine
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well, a 6 for you!
I smiled through the whole thing - loved your meter and your words - much deserving of All Time Best. I love the first two lines of the third verse, especially. Very pleasurable!
Katharine
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
Comment from l.raven
Hi Jay, it's all those memories we have
made...that have made use who we are...
I look back on them all...but relive the
good ones in my mind...those memories are
what gave us the wisdom we knew...to help
us on our journey in life...
I love your poem my sweet friend...
so very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
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Hi Jay, it's all those memories we have
made...that have made use who we are...
I look back on them all...but relive the
good ones in my mind...those memories are
what gave us the wisdom we knew...to help
us on our journey in life...
I love your poem my sweet friend...
so very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
Comment from ESOSTINE
Life is laced in experiences and memories of which could be good or bad. Your poem points out the beauty of discarding the bad memories and retain the good ones. Thanks for sharing from your wisdom's pot. Well enjoyed.
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Life is laced in experiences and memories of which could be good or bad. Your poem points out the beauty of discarding the bad memories and retain the good ones. Thanks for sharing from your wisdom's pot. Well enjoyed.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
