Haiku in Green
Haiku 5-7-5 syllable 3 line poem7 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is a good haiku for the contest, and I wish you the best in the contest. It is always fun when you're out where there's a green field and you can walk in bare feet on the grass. Patricia
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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This is a good haiku for the contest, and I wish you the best in the contest. It is always fun when you're out where there's a green field and you can walk in bare feet on the grass. Patricia
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for stopping by to review this little haiku.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The grass is covered right now here but we await green grass upon the earth. It brings warmth and prickliness to our feet when walking on the ground. It is joy to think about green grass. Like your poem.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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The grass is covered right now here but we await green grass upon the earth. It brings warmth and prickliness to our feet when walking on the ground. It is joy to think about green grass. Like your poem.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your stellar review.
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Reviews do bring stars! The only thing that there are never enough six star ratings; we have to send virtual stars sometimes.
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Reviews do bring stars! The only thing that there are never enough six star ratings; we have to send virtual stars sometimes.
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So true. Maybe they will increase it to a dozen six-star ratings a week, eventually.
Comment from royowen
A fine haiku the artistic image fits you poem extremely well my friend, I've noted that Gypsy blue rose is very good at literary economy in her scant use odiferous articles. Beautifully written Crystie, blessings Roy
Suggestion : (fence) where tree trunks mark (the) fringe.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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A fine haiku the artistic image fits you poem extremely well my friend, I've noted that Gypsy blue rose is very good at literary economy in her scant use odiferous articles. Beautifully written Crystie, blessings Roy
Suggestion : (fence) where tree trunks mark (the) fringe.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for your review and suggestions.
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Most welcome
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Most welcome
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Haiku in Green, has the proper formatting and describes the scene seen here well. I would suggest centering the text, losing the capital letter, and removing the highlighting from the words.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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This 5-7-5, Haiku in Green, has the proper formatting and describes the scene seen here well. I would suggest centering the text, losing the capital letter, and removing the highlighting from the words.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I guess I make my layout as clear to read as possible at midnight, since light is not as bright in the room then.
Comment from Teri7
Crystie, This is a very lovely 5-7-5 3 line poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery that went well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Crystie, This is a very lovely 5-7-5 3 line poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery that went well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for your five star review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
What a beautiful scene described here Crystie and the green grass and green trees are missed when I live abroad in a warmer climate for a while and when I return home and view the green from the air I have a sense of nostalgia that brings a tear to my eye and this is what your poem did to me here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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What a beautiful scene described here Crystie and the green grass and green trees are missed when I live abroad in a warmer climate for a while and when I return home and view the green from the air I have a sense of nostalgia that brings a tear to my eye and this is what your poem did to me here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Green sure makes a difference. Thank you for spending time to review this little haiku.
Comment from lyenochka
That's a lovely spring haiku with lots of alliteration and captures the visual sense of the greenness that spring brings and also the textual sensation of grass on the feet. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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That's a lovely spring haiku with lots of alliteration and captures the visual sense of the greenness that spring brings and also the textual sensation of grass on the feet. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review this little haiku.
