Reaching for Dreams
A NANNI for the club challenge15 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
I like this a lot. While appreciating the beauty surrounding, one can be drawn from "good" to "better and best", higher aspirations, greater heights - although effort is required. Lovely one.
Wendy
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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I like this a lot. While appreciating the beauty surrounding, one can be drawn from "good" to "better and best", higher aspirations, greater heights - although effort is required. Lovely one.
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you Wendy, for your lovely comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Nanni poem- interesting form - 4 lines 20-25 syllables- good picture presentation- goes well with the poem- having good flow and connection between line - not just words to satisfy a syllable count- but actually has a deeper meaning- I like this quality in poems- not common- IN THE WORLD (the seasons ) - flowers nature- while at the same time seeking higher meaning in life- BUT NOT OF THE WORLD- the observer- nicely done - AP
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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I like your Nanni poem- interesting form - 4 lines 20-25 syllables- good picture presentation- goes well with the poem- having good flow and connection between line - not just words to satisfy a syllable count- but actually has a deeper meaning- I like this quality in poems- not common- IN THE WORLD (the seasons ) - flowers nature- while at the same time seeking higher meaning in life- BUT NOT OF THE WORLD- the observer- nicely done - AP
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Nicki Nance
Your poem is lovely. It's an autobiography in a few lines. I became invested in the writer's hope for getting to a higher level of connection. That coveted shift from not bad to pretty great?
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Your poem is lovely. It's an autobiography in a few lines. I became invested in the writer's hope for getting to a higher level of connection. That coveted shift from not bad to pretty great?
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you for your wonderful review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
What a tremendous image. Tethered to earthly beauty that is easily perceived, yet drawn to the mystery of distant vistas for their potential. What a choice! kay
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What a tremendous image. Tethered to earthly beauty that is easily perceived, yet drawn to the mystery of distant vistas for their potential. What a choice! kay
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Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you so very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
A lovely Naani poem! I like the different perspectives from the valley to the mountains. Although flowers grow below in the warmth of the smooth plains, it's the mountains that attract with ambitions for loftier goals.
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A lovely Naani poem! I like the different perspectives from the valley to the mountains. Although flowers grow below in the warmth of the smooth plains, it's the mountains that attract with ambitions for loftier goals.
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Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
