Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is a beautifully written poem. Your photo choice is very colourful a beautiful scene. NIce background colour and font as well. Great club entry.

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023

Thank you very much, I enjoyed trying this form again, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

I personally am more focused on what's right here in front of me - rather than what's above. Therefore, I'd be admiring the flowers! But in my more reflective moments, I do look up at the stars and try to touch them. Your Naani is lovely and inspiring.

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023

Thank you very much, as alwyas very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from karenina

Excellent

Nice form, and isn't this just like we humans? No matter what we have in view, the expectation is that there is a more pristine vantage point! Much to be said for living in the moment! We'll all reach our destination...it's inevitable, as we are all mortal...

Karenina

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023

Thank you so much for your wonderful and encouraging comments, I hope you are mending well, my wishes are for you****kahpot

reply by karenina on 30-Jan-2023

Thanks for the good wishes! One day at a time, but I'm healing...

reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023

Glad to hear

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Kym,
This is a good mixture of artwork and poetry. I like the color scheme.
It seem to pick up a religious tone. Lookin up toward the mountain being a metaphor for favoring the beauty of Heaven to that of Earth.
Keep writing and stay healthy/
Joan

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023

Thank you Joan, for your wonderful and very encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

reply by dragonpoet on 31-Jan-2023

You are very welcome, Kym.
Joan

Comment from Karyn2

Excellent

Beautiful with wonderful nature inspired sentiments! I love that sense of desiring the view above. Not only do the mountains look wonderful but an altered and higher perspective is freeing in someway to see beyond our own circumstances. THis poem expresses freedom to me. Lovely words and carefully crafted.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023

Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments and review****kahpot

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, Kym,

Extraordinary naani for the club. Good form and syllables count. I love the presentation.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023

Thank you, I enjoyed trying this form again, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Well done on crafting an excellent Naani. I too prefer a mountaintop existence and love the theme of your poem. Wouldn't it be nice to visit the location of your photo? Great verse for this prompt!!

Melissa

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023

Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Those mountains seem to draw us in and we yearn to be near them as they seem like sentinels protecting the valleys. I am surrounded by mountains and I just love the scene, your few words are magical here, love Dolly x

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023

Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from John Ciarmello

Excellent

I loved this, Kahpot. Your words are always beautiful and well-placed. I do enjoy the views from above as well. This is a beautiful Naani, my friend. Best, JohnC

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023

Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

I desire the view above where the mountains beckon is an interesting way to end this naani poem. I am interested in knowing more about this style of poetry. Gyspy writes well and teaches a course for you and you have improved considerably with her teaching style.
Thank you for sharing this interesting and provocative style of poetry.
Jesse

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023

Thank you Jesse, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot