Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot

Exceptional

This is extremely creative and brilliant. Great job meeting the prompt. This was a difficult one to meet in my opinion. Thank you for writing and sharing.
Good Luck.
Write on

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023

Oh my goodness! I just saw these six stars! Thank you!

Comment from TDLRasmar

Excellent

There were a couple spots that made me laugh out loud, so I would say humor is a good description. For the sake of this story, I would have changed his name to Fartquaad.

I was a little confused in the paragraph that you write of three princesses. I only saw two, Fiona and Snow White.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023

Great review. I switched a 'and' for an 'or' and now it makes better sense that there were three princesses. Thank you! Also, I wonder if I could get away with switching it to Fartquaad? Would that be too much of a change for the voters. Seems really funny.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

Your backstory of Lord Farquaad was a new one. It almost made me feel sorry for him. Having read this, I am now almost certain he wasn't to blame for his actions. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023

So my work here . . . is done!