Oh! How my little grandsons love trains, Jim, and they are just little fellas!
Your poem reads smoothly and tells an awesome tale.
I do remember Bill Peet's works, although I don't believe I have any of his books in my children's library.
Captivating and rollicking.
Thank you for sharing!
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
Thanks, Diane. My grandsons loved them too when they were younger. I just hope little kids won't find the ending too disappointing.