The Death of Brody Dodoeder
A Fanstory Tribute23 total reviews
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Wow - I did not see that coming, and neither did Colin Ermintrude Cunningham. What a way to go, a bullet through his head, or was it his eye from looking through the peep hole. Either way - dead! This was one suspenseful and realistic read. Good job.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Wow - I did not see that coming, and neither did Colin Ermintrude Cunningham. What a way to go, a bullet through his head, or was it his eye from looking through the peep hole. Either way - dead! This was one suspenseful and realistic read. Good job.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Many thanks for checking this one out. Much appreciated. G
Comment from jacquelyn popp
This was a fun story for me to read. I liked the twist that was in it. Very enjoyable and entertaining read, and quite interesting. It was a very creative piece that you wrote. Well done. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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This was a fun story for me to read. I liked the twist that was in it. Very enjoyable and entertaining read, and quite interesting. It was a very creative piece that you wrote. Well done. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Many thanks. GMG
Comment from estory
The action is crisp here, that last scene explodes with the bullet going through the glass into the murderer of Brody. Nice set up from the opening scene to the end, lots of seething emotion seems to flow just under the surface of the scenes here. estory
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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The action is crisp here, that last scene explodes with the bullet going through the glass into the murderer of Brody. Nice set up from the opening scene to the end, lots of seething emotion seems to flow just under the surface of the scenes here. estory
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Many thanks, once again. G
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun story with a twist in the tale and I enjoyed it as I was entertained with this short and clever write, a fine fantasy tribute, well done, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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A fun story with a twist in the tale and I enjoyed it as I was entertained with this short and clever write, a fine fantasy tribute, well done, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Much appreciated, my friend. G
Comment from susand3022
Like any good horror movie... you have to ask, why did he open the door and not make a run for it out the window to the inevitable fire escape or the ledge or whatever?
Because thugs are so dumb... they always go for the door.
Susan :)
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Like any good horror movie... you have to ask, why did he open the door and not make a run for it out the window to the inevitable fire escape or the ledge or whatever?
Because thugs are so dumb... they always go for the door.
Susan :)
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Many thanks. G
Comment from Karyn2
I'm not familiar with Brett's character but gee I loved this piece! You sure know how to write in a witty and gripping manner. A really great read and I'm fresh in with 6's!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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I'm not familiar with Brett's character but gee I loved this piece! You sure know how to write in a witty and gripping manner. A really great read and I'm fresh in with 6's!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Many thanks for the great response. Just a bit of fun this one. lol G
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is a cute and creative story. The ending was terrific. I love to write surprise endings myself, so I thought this was perfect. I truly enjoyed your story. Nice writing.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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This is a cute and creative story. The ending was terrific. I love to write surprise endings myself, so I thought this was perfect. I truly enjoyed your story. Nice writing.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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I have a little piece coming up on misdirection and twists soon. All the best
G
Comment from Wayne Fowler
I like it! Good work.
It rings of my wife and my stories in a book we titled 'Plot This' where killed off literary characters get revenge on the writers who killed them.
Hah! I post some individual stories from it here on FS.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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I like it! Good work.
It rings of my wife and my stories in a book we titled 'Plot This' where killed off literary characters get revenge on the writers who killed them.
Hah! I post some individual stories from it here on FS.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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One of my favourite pieces is a story where the animal creatures of an author who has kept them going for decades and not let them grow up come out of the book and sort her out. lol Many thanks, Wayne. G
Comment from Jay Squires
I'm afraid that after two read-throughs, I still don't understand the "battered and bruised body". Was he already dead? Or, was Chet putting him out of his misery? And finally, the trigger that Chet pulled was metaphorical. Some mysteries inside of mysteries. But sometimes, without prompting, answers come to me at 4 AM. So many things keep me awake at 4 AM.
No mystery about this though: You've written some powerful prose here, G. You practice all that you preach in your tutorials. Your timing, though, for a six, couldn't be worse.
Jay
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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I'm afraid that after two read-throughs, I still don't understand the "battered and bruised body". Was he already dead? Or, was Chet putting him out of his misery? And finally, the trigger that Chet pulled was metaphorical. Some mysteries inside of mysteries. But sometimes, without prompting, answers come to me at 4 AM. So many things keep me awake at 4 AM.
No mystery about this though: You've written some powerful prose here, G. You practice all that you preach in your tutorials. Your timing, though, for a six, couldn't be worse.
Jay
Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Chet was putting him out of his misery. Brody is a character in a book, thus the writer's metaphorical trigger. It's a bit surreal this one but it's based on an experience Brett had with his Cody stories.
Many thanks, Jay
G
Comment from royowen
What an excellent post, as always, slightly off the planet, but would certainly match the Mad Magazine illustration that was representative post G, I love these off the precipice posts, well done, blessings my friends, blessings Roy
Typo : Colin Ermintrude Cunn(n)ingham
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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What an excellent post, as always, slightly off the planet, but would certainly match the Mad Magazine illustration that was representative post G, I love these off the precipice posts, well done, blessings my friends, blessings Roy
Typo : Colin Ermintrude Cunn(n)ingham
Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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I'm just writing for the fun of it on site these days. My 'proper' work goes elsewhere. I like to use the ssite to play around with things. lol
G
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