Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Aw. And that's the best ending for falling into the sin of lust - mutual lust that grows into true lifelong love! Enjoyed your fun contest entry which would be great for Valentine's as well.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023

dear Helen,Thank you for your review and the five stars for Just Lust.
I entered it mainly as a whim, but chickened out over the ending. That's my sense pf morals kicking in. Ah well "the girl can't help it"
cheers Cass

reply by lyenochka on 17-Feb-2023

I'm glad you "couldn't help it!" 💖😊

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Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

I found your poem interesting and a delightful read. I love the rhythm throughout the writing. Rhyming poems are my favorite. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest. Nice work.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023

Thank you for your review and good wishes.I wrote it just for fun
BloopThank you for your kind words and good wishes

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Excellent, yes, lust is a sin but I was glad to read in your poem that it turned around and had a happy ending, the flow in this read is wonderful, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023

Thank you for your kind words and good wishes, This was written very quickly after the first two lines came to me cheers Bloop