My Angels Heart
The gifts she gave me,49 total reviews
Comment from Paul McFarland
That's pretty good, Willie. It was more meaningful to me once I read your note. It appears that your wife has passed on. I am very sorry about that, but it seems that she was a very important part in bringing up your children. That's a fine photograph.
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That's pretty good, Willie. It was more meaningful to me once I read your note. It appears that your wife has passed on. I am very sorry about that, but it seems that she was a very important part in bringing up your children. That's a fine photograph.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
Comment from jacquelyn popp
Very nicely done. The flow of your words and rhyming were perfectly done. I enjoyed reading this. What a nice tribute for your family . Thank you for sharing.
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Very nicely done. The flow of your words and rhyming were perfectly done. I enjoyed reading this. What a nice tribute for your family . Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Thanks for sharing the photo, notes, and poem, Willie.
-I like your theme of "garden of love" "petals...sent from above."
-A loving tribute to your wife and children that shows
how much you loved her, and how she loved you and the children.
-All of your imagery of nature is a perfect way to honor her.
-My favorite line is
"Each petal different as a flake of snow."
-Well done. Have a great day and week ahead.
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-Thanks for sharing the photo, notes, and poem, Willie.
-I like your theme of "garden of love" "petals...sent from above."
-A loving tribute to your wife and children that shows
how much you loved her, and how she loved you and the children.
-All of your imagery of nature is a perfect way to honor her.
-My favorite line is
"Each petal different as a flake of snow."
-Well done. Have a great day and week ahead.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
Comment from GWHARGIS
I feel the same about my own garden. Far from perfect but good people. I like how you give the credit of the offspring to the gardener, presumably your wife. I'm sure you did your part in nurturing your children. Great poem. Gretchen
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I feel the same about my own garden. Far from perfect but good people. I like how you give the credit of the offspring to the gardener, presumably your wife. I'm sure you did your part in nurturing your children. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Wow. Unclad the four of them would be hard to tell apart. Do they take after you or your other half? ...........................................................................................
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Wow. Unclad the four of them would be hard to tell apart. Do they take after you or your other half? ...........................................................................................
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
Comment from Jim Wile
This was such a sweet poem about you and your dear family, Willie. It sounds like you and your wife "tended" the kids very well to become the garden that never disappoints. Lovely sentiments in a lovely poem.
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This was such a sweet poem about you and your dear family, Willie. It sounds like you and your wife "tended" the kids very well to become the garden that never disappoints. Lovely sentiments in a lovely poem.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
Comment from ArwenE
This poem is a beautiful tribute to the love and nurturing of a family. The metaphor of a "garden of love" is a unique and powerful way to express the different personalities and roles of family members. The use of flower petals as a representation of each member is a poignant and touching image. The final lines, where the speaker's angel has tended to the garden with love, brings a sense of peace and warmth to the poem. Overall, this is a well-crafted and emotional piece of poetry.
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This poem is a beautiful tribute to the love and nurturing of a family. The metaphor of a "garden of love" is a unique and powerful way to express the different personalities and roles of family members. The use of flower petals as a representation of each member is a poignant and touching image. The final lines, where the speaker's angel has tended to the garden with love, brings a sense of peace and warmth to the poem. Overall, this is a well-crafted and emotional piece of poetry.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
The central theme of the garden works well. It shows the character of your 'Angel' with all its associations with nurture and sensitivity. The photograph captures the mood of the poem.
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The central theme of the garden works well. It shows the character of your 'Angel' with all its associations with nurture and sensitivity. The photograph captures the mood of the poem.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
Comment from Ida T. Johnson
This is a nice, loving tribute to your family! Albeit a bit simplistic, good use of garden metaphors for your family, in addition to the photo. Both your words and photo clearly show your love and affection for your family, as well as a father's pride. Good job!
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This is a nice, loving tribute to your family! Albeit a bit simplistic, good use of garden metaphors for your family, in addition to the photo. Both your words and photo clearly show your love and affection for your family, as well as a father's pride. Good job!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
A lovely well written poem. It is so heartfelt, whimsical and filled with so much pride and love. I also am a believer of rhyming poetry.That Is what I am comfortable with in my writing. Thank you for sharing.
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A lovely well written poem. It is so heartfelt, whimsical and filled with so much pride and love. I also am a believer of rhyming poetry.That Is what I am comfortable with in my writing. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
