Poppy
'Poppy' was the name of my first dog10 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
repetition of puppy dog quite often
like the idea you are writing this poem because of a beloved dog
it is very sad when you lose a pet; I have also had this experience too many times
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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repetition of puppy dog quite often
like the idea you are writing this poem because of a beloved dog
it is very sad when you lose a pet; I have also had this experience too many times
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you Rosemary for your generous review. It is appreciated.
Comment from persevere
This a sweet poem about Poppy but it is about your feelings and not hers as required. It seems to be a childhood memory and would be lovely if put to music
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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This a sweet poem about Poppy but it is about your feelings and not hers as required. It seems to be a childhood memory and would be lovely if put to music
Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Thank you for your review and comments. Very much appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Pups can be a bit awkward until they know their role in life and then they are more obedient and easier to manage, your poem made me smile Cecilia, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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Pups can be a bit awkward until they know their role in life and then they are more obedient and easier to manage, your poem made me smile Cecilia, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for your review and rating Dolly. Your comment has me thinking of just how much puppy's are often so much like our children who are "Lovable and Trainable". You have me smiling as well.',
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry in the Best Paw contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. The repeated wording is an effective tool in poems. However, this entry while good doesn't tell the poem from the pet's perspective. You were to personify the pet and tell what Poppy was thinking. The visual is cute. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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This is a good entry in the Best Paw contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. The repeated wording is an effective tool in poems. However, this entry while good doesn't tell the poem from the pet's perspective. You were to personify the pet and tell what Poppy was thinking. The visual is cute. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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Thank you Sandra for your valuable review and rating. Both are appreciated.
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You are welcome.
Comment from jessizero
This was a sweet and moving poem about your "puppy dog." I understand missing them so much - I still grieve over my Lainie after several years. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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This was a sweet and moving poem about your "puppy dog." I understand missing them so much - I still grieve over my Lainie after several years. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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Thank you jessizero, your kind review is appreciate.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Aww, what a cutie, and so is your poem -- I am absolutely charmed. Your use of repetition is very effective -- "Puppy dog," -- I love it! Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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Aww, what a cutie, and so is your poem -- I am absolutely charmed. Your use of repetition is very effective -- "Puppy dog," -- I love it! Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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Thank you for your kind review and rating. Both are appreciated.
Comment from patcelaw
This would make a delightful book for children. Children love puppy dogs they love stories about puppy dogs and they love pictures of puppy dogs in action. Keep writing and keep sharing with us. Patricia.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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This would make a delightful book for children. Children love puppy dogs they love stories about puppy dogs and they love pictures of puppy dogs in action. Keep writing and keep sharing with us. Patricia.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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Thank you for your encouraging review and rating. Both are appreciated.
All the best to you.
Comment from royowen
The loss of the shoe, or at least the dear dog's propensity to move them no matter what! Yes, when my wife goes out, our little Moodle dog, will transfer her shoe from one room to another, why? I have no idea, well done CeciliaLynne, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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The loss of the shoe, or at least the dear dog's propensity to move them no matter what! Yes, when my wife goes out, our little Moodle dog, will transfer her shoe from one room to another, why? I have no idea, well done CeciliaLynne, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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All the best to you Roy your reviews are always treasured and appreciated. " Your Blessed to Blessed" Thank you.
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Good job
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Thank you so much. Your reviews are appreciate. Blessings.
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Most welcome
Comment from Rickie1
Cecilia
Cute poem and picture. I have a stubborn old dog who doesn't like to get up and go out for her bio breaks. She once was a bundle of energy.
Rickie
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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Cecilia
Cute poem and picture. I have a stubborn old dog who doesn't like to get up and go out for her bio breaks. She once was a bundle of energy.
Rickie
Comment Written 24-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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Thank you Rickie for your generous rating and encouraging review. Pets are special. All the best to you as well.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a sweet tribute to your first dog Poppy. With the first pet dog it is almost like puppy love. You never forget. I like how this poems shows a side to the character of Poppy - playful yet strong minded. An enjoyable read. Best of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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This is a sweet tribute to your first dog Poppy. With the first pet dog it is almost like puppy love. You never forget. I like how this poems shows a side to the character of Poppy - playful yet strong minded. An enjoyable read. Best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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Thank you for your encouraging review and generous rating.
