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It's Finally Coming

Waiting for the school bus on a cold morning.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Such a wonderful 5/7/5 offering, Harry!
Congratulations on your well-earned win.
Your words brought back memories of my children, forlornly waiting for the school bus, in our wooded northern Michigan neighborhood on a cold winter morning. And yes, birds, and many other little animals, were hiding in their nests.

Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023
    Wow! Winter morning in Northern Michigan. Hard to imagine a colder bus stop. Thanks for the read, review and sharing your memories.
Comment from patcelaw
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I remember walking to school on a very frigid day and wanting so much to be inside where it was warm. The day I am speaking of it was at-16 degrees.
Patricia

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
    What do you think would have made this a five star offering?
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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The faithful old school bus is spotted in the distance and relieves those children waiting in the cold. The morning pick up in Winter is a trial, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
    Thanks, Dolly, for your read and review. Never road a school bus; we had to walk.
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 24-Jan-2023
    Me too as a matter of fact, I reckon walking back then stood me in good stead as I am an avid walker and runner, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
    Good for you. I have eliminated running, but walking is a pleasure and wonderful time to think.