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53 total reviews 
Comment from Regina Elliott
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Good Sunday morning,
star poetess! This is such a
cute rib tickler in a concise
poem. Dear friend, some of
your writing reminds me
of the great late writer,
Erma Bombeck. She could tell
a story so humorously, just
like you. Bravo! xxoo

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
    Oh Regina, I am so sorry for being so late, after you so sweetly went and reviewed this, all the kind comments and six stars. You are about the sweetest friend ever. I appreciate it so much. Thank you and once again, I am so sorry it is so late.
Comment from lyenochka
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That's a huge possum - whew! It's only a picture filter. Yes, I remember that time when the "brain is playing possum" for boys and girls at different times of their adolescent years! Congratulations on the win!!


 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
    Helen, lol, this is just a filter from the app , Snapchat. I have dozens of photos like this myself of me as Marie Antoinette, a bald man, you name it.
    They are loads of fun. And yes, I even have a possum on my head.
    I will send you a few for a good laugh.
    I hope you know how much your awesome review means to me. Thank you so much for your very kind words for my poem. They are so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from Write Right Writer
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Hey Debi...

Yikes! A domesticated possum? There's a new and different thought. Kinda scary. Kinda crazy. Kinda fun!

Adding the disclaimer was a good move.

Hope all is well with you and those you love.

Blessings...

Curt (WRW)

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
    Curt, thank you for your very kind review and comments for my poem, with a possum attached. Lol! I really enjoyed writing it.
    I sure appreciate it my friend
Comment from Raul1
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I have enjoyed reading your funny and hilarious poem. Congratulations on winning the contest! It is difficult to win, but you did it. Exceptional work! Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023
    Awe Raul, you are a Sweetheart! Thank you for this kind package of goodies! The great review and comments, and your generous six stars are all so appreciated!
Comment from Janet Foor
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A fun and funny 5/7/5 poem Debi. Excellent picture and presentation to add to the humor. Nicely done and congratulations on the win.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

Comment from rspoet
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Hello Debi.
Congratulations on the win and the fun 5-7-5 poem!
Nice addition of the three rhyme and the interesting photo.
I once caught a young possum in a chipmunk trap.
Relocated it to our wildlife area.
Best wishes.
Robert



 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023
    Hey Robert, I have missed seeing you. Thanks for your fun comments for this poem. I do like to do the short ones with humor! Thanks again my dear friend!
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
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Debi,
Congratulations on your win in this contest! I like this 5-7-5 poem; it's funny, sweet an serious.
I'm sorry I am reviewing it late. But it is exceptional, none the less.
Good luck with your future writings,
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

Comment from nomi338
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Boy does that ring a bell! I have experienced spells even as an adult when my brain decides to just go on vacation. I sit or stand there as if in a trance, wondering how did I get here? Where in the heck am I? What do I do next? How do I get out of this predicament?
May I invite you out of my brain? LOL.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
Excellent
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Amusing and witty poem. It's amazing what you can do with such a limited
prompt. It also makes a serious point. Keeping young people enthusiastic
and involved in education is a challenge.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
    Dear Sarah, as always you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my quote poem. It's so appreciated, my dear friend!
reply by Sarah Das Gupta on 27-Jan-2023
    Welcome!
Comment from jenintorre
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Hi there Debi
Congratulations on your win. It is so well deserved.
I really enjoyed reading this very cute, fun poem.
Great artwork and presentation.
Best wishes. Jen.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023