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Jackson is Going to Grammys

Part 2 of 3

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Comment from royowen
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I've visited New York on four occasions, I've been to the top of the Rock, the empire state, the Guggenheim, tobogganed in Central Park. Walked my grandson to summer school in upper Manhattan. Worshiped in the Brooklyn Tabernacle, and been to shows on broadway and Carnegie hall. Written, an excellent post, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
    Thank you, Roy. You?ve done quite a bit in NYC. I?ll post part 3, next week concluding Jackson?s trip.
    Thanks a bunch for sharing. That?s part of the fun here on FS, sharing with everyone!
    John
reply by royowen on 25-Jan-2023
    It?s a wonderful place
Comment from Sally Law
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This is a delightful read and blessed me to see just about every family name in here I also possess. My grandchildren call me Grammy. I love that name! My higher calling. I'm not Italian but I could be. Love the food you have here. Precious little man too.

Sending you my today as always,
Sally :))

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
    Thank you, "Grammy", for reading and sharing. This is a fun part of writing when we get to share our joys in life!
    John
reply by Sally Law on 24-Jan-2023
    You?re welcome, John. It really is fun being a writer. Blessings,
    Grammy Sally ;))
Comment from Terry Broxson
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LOL, dang, I wish I had been there for the pizza. The taco supreme sounds perfect for a guy from Texas. I don't have grandkids. We missed the first requirement. But without first-hand experience, I still think your story is wonderful. Terry.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
    The taco supreme is one our favorites, though we like them all.
    Thanks for reading. Much appreciated.
    John
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Great story. I always wanted to be Italian, having lived in the Little Italy community of Chambersburg, Trenton, NJ as a kid. The one downside to this story is not being invited for the eats since there was an overabundance.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
    Well, we?ll have to fix that glitch somehow.

    Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

    John
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Nicely written. Good work.
A good nights rest was needed. - night's (possessive)
Jackson�??�?�¢??s - these can be edited out.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
    Dang it. I did edit a bunch after my copy-n-paste. They somehow seem to show up.
    Thanks for reading. John
Comment from eliz100
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I enjoyed reading your story. I can identify with it. I met my two granddaughters in NYC this past December we did The American Girl Doll Store and Radio City. They are seven and nine. I want to go back and read the first section. I am sure you recognize the additional marks here and there. Have a blessed day.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
    You saw the Radio City Christmas show?

    Aren?t you in Australia?

    Thanks for reading and sharing.
    John
reply by eliz100 on 23-Jan-2023
    No, I live in Pa., north of the Pocono resort area. Right now I am in Myrtle Beach SC.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
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Well done,
Sharing love and fun, first with our children and later our grandchildren truly is a blessing.
The love, respect and joy found in your writing reflects a close-knit loving extended family.
Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
    Thank you. I?m glad you stopped to read my post.

    John
Comment from country ranch writer
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For a four year old it was like going to Disney with all the fun at Grammys and papas they went all out to make him happy and comfortable to match his age.
Monday1/23/23.

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 Comment Written 23-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
    Thank you CRW for taking the time to read and share.
    John
reply by country ranch writer on 23-Jan-2023
    Huggs!
reply by country ranch writer on 23-Jan-2023
    Hugs
Comment from Mia Twysted
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Oh, to see the world through the eyes of a little child is one of the best ways there is. We often forget our own wonderment as we grow older. Kids don't have the world weighing them down yet, as we adults tend to let happen.

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 Comment Written 23-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
    Thank you so much for reading. I don?t know if you read part 1 or not.

    I do appreciate you stopping over. John