Comment from Kaiku

Excellent

A great story and deserving of my vote in the writing prompt. Sad that he died so young but what a hero to you and others. An Indiana man to boot. Wouldn't surprise me if he and my father didn't cross paths. Well done.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023

Thank you so much! He was quite a man and a good example to many.

Comment from Dr. Von

Exceptional

This is a remarkable and loving piece you wrote with honesty. The words you chose express the genuine love and respect you experienced at the hands of your grandfather. While it is well written, it is also personal. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023

Thank you so much, Von. This six star means more to me than any other I have received. I really wanted my Gpa to get a six. I appreciate you so much man. Thank you!

reply by Dr. Von on 26-Jan-2023

You are very welcome! It is a wonderful memory.

Comment from dellsworthpoet

Excellent

A nice homage. The piece flows well. The images are clear. The language is warm and conversational. The sepia picture adds to the nostalgic feel. The narrative stays on point.

Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023

Thanks!

reply by dellsworthpoet on 21-Jan-2023

You are welcome.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful and well written contest entry for the What Do you say to God? contest entry.


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Best wishes in the contest! Teri

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023

Thank you Teri!