To Dare
25 Syllable Poem contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Exquisite, Mystery Writer!
I wish I had six stars to affix on your offering.
You managed to encapsulate a plethora of emotions in just 25 syllables.
You offering is not only creative, it is original...
Kudos!
diane
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
Exquisite, Mystery Writer!
I wish I had six stars to affix on your offering.
You managed to encapsulate a plethora of emotions in just 25 syllables.
You offering is not only creative, it is original...
Kudos!
diane
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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Hey, Diane, hello. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the big six offer. Rarely do delve into love poems but this time I was in just that right mood. Then, I came across the perfect picture and just like that, I was sold. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and kind comments, D. Have yourself a wonderful weekend and thank you again.
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Ron
Comment from Ginda Simpson
There is such a gentleness to this verse. It speaks of vulnerability and hope. Yes, the answer is YES. Risk it all to love again. This is a beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
There is such a gentleness to this verse. It speaks of vulnerability and hope. Yes, the answer is YES. Risk it all to love again. This is a beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Ginda. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece. have yourself a wonderful weekend and thank you again.
Comment from Sarah Tummey
I love this one - giving yourself a bit of a talking-to! It's a great reminder to us to keep the past from negatively affecting our present. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
I love this one - giving yourself a bit of a talking-to! It's a great reminder to us to keep the past from negatively affecting our present. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the kind review, Sarah. I appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Shirley Rebstock
Love this. Beautifully expresses, loss of love and then time passes and the heart begins to heal and maybe take another chance on love. Well done, says a lot in a few words.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
Love this. Beautifully expresses, loss of love and then time passes and the heart begins to heal and maybe take another chance on love. Well done, says a lot in a few words.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Shirley. I dearly the gracious rating and kind comments. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a great day and thank you again.
Comment from mermaids
Aaaaah...feelings and emotions come forth clearly in your words. Should we dare to love again? This is a great theme for a poem, it is the human experience. Excellent use of words and a smooth poetic flow of form.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
Aaaaah...feelings and emotions come forth clearly in your words. Should we dare to love again? This is a great theme for a poem, it is the human experience. Excellent use of words and a smooth poetic flow of form.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the great review and kind comments, mermaids. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a wonderful day.