Daydreams from the Ashes
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Comment from Karyn2
A great poem of reflection, memories, passing of time. I liked the thought of memories as small echoes of moments and some great examples of these from your experience. I viewing the video of the dancer in her 90's I believe with dementia who began performing all the body moves to Swan Lake remembering her Prima Ballerina days it was so moving to watch. I'm glad you thought to bring this into your writing!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
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A great poem of reflection, memories, passing of time. I liked the thought of memories as small echoes of moments and some great examples of these from your experience. I viewing the video of the dancer in her 90's I believe with dementia who began performing all the body moves to Swan Lake remembering her Prima Ballerina days it was so moving to watch. I'm glad you thought to bring this into your writing!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate your time. I tried to keep it short and simple. I hope you have a wonderful day.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Some memories are good, others bad. Your poem is very well written and has a lovely flow of words, making it a delight to read. The artwork is perfect for the writing.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
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Some memories are good, others bad. Your poem is very well written and has a lovely flow of words, making it a delight to read. The artwork is perfect for the writing.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate your time. I know not all memories are good, but I've spent so long thinking about the bad ones that I wanted to tap into the loving ones. I hope you have a wonderful day.
