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Alec (tracker) Riley

The best aboriginal tracker in Australia

16 total reviews 
Comment from mermaids
Exceptional
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This is the kind of history I like to read about. This man is a hero and your poem reads like a mini movie, I can see him in action, tracking down the criminals. Excellent poem that teaches the reader.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
    Thank you for reading my friend. I've got some more tales to tell. K xx
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Exceptional
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I read your notes first, then your poem Kay and enjoyed reading both. A good story to share about the skills of the aboriginal trackers and Seargent Riley in particular. How proud his grandson must feel making his grandfather's story. Well done.
Cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
    Hello Valda, Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed. Hope you are not cut off with all this rain? K xx
reply by Pearl Edwards on 17-Jan-2023
    We're okay in Townsville wet but not like Mackay. Thanks Kay.
Comment from Sanku
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I used to read Australian romances and they portrayed lfe in cattle or sheep stations..they used to mention the aboriginals who could track expertly ..
Thank you for this poetic portrait of such a tracker.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
    Thank you for reading Sanku. These occurrences are a regular event in the outback. Aboriginals are one with the land. K xx
Comment from Karyn2
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I have not heard of Alec Riley before. What a terrific subject to write about! Thank you for telling this story through poem. I wondered if perhaps a different poetic or narrative form may have suited the telling of this story better? Using the repeat words in this one for me halted the flow in places. But poetry is so subjective so another may feel this works perfectly for them! You know I love your writing Aussie and it is a good poem with excellent choice of theme.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
    The film released by his grandson is called Tracker.
    Never make excuses for your like or dislike of a poet's style. I appreciate you thinking another type of narrative would have been better. K xx
Comment from BethShelby
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This is a an amazing story of a tracker that seemed to always find his man. I'm so glad he was able to get some of the recognition he deserved. I'm glad his grandson make a movie abou him. He sounds like quite a man.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
    Hello Beth, Thanks for reading my friend. Glad you enjoyed. K xx
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
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Thanks for sharing a very informative poem about a man, an aboriginal tracker, few would know anything about.
Such stories probably still abound in aboriginal lore but so many never reach the eyes and ears of the white fella.
Blessings
Shirley

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
    Hello Shirley, His grandson has just released a film called Tracker. Thanks for reading my friend. K xx
reply by Shirley E Kennedy on 14-Jan-2023
    You are welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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What an amazing story told in your signature style, Aussie.
I loved reading it. The picture you paired with it was amazing, too.
I believe Riley lived the land he loved and there was no one
better to do the kind of job he did. He knew all of the intricacies
of his land where others unfamiliar with the land wouldn't have
the success he had. Your words flowed smoothly and created great
imagery.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
    Hello Jan, What's happening on the bridge? Thanks for reading and glad you were intrigued. His grandson has just released a movie called Tracker. These bushmen are amazing. love, K.
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Kay,
This is a good biographical loop poem. It tells the story well of this man who brought justice for the criminals and closure for families of victiims.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
    Hi Joan, Thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed. Blessings, K xx
reply by dragonpoet on 15-Jan-2023
    No problem, Kay.
    Have a great Sunday.
    Joan
Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you for writing about this heroic man, Wiradjun Elder Alec Riley. What a gifted tracker whom the Lord called to bring justice for the people of his time!

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
    G'Day Lena, Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed. Blessings, Kay xx
Comment from country ranch writer
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A man well suited for his position of keeping criminals behind bars for their crimes. He was the greatest tracker of his time he'd put an blind hound to shame.
Friday:1/13/2023

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
    G'Day my friend. Yes, he was the greatest tracker of his time. Brought many criminals to justice. Love, Kay xx
reply by country ranch writer on 14-Jan-2023
    Hugs
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
    Big hugs back, across the world. K xx
reply by country ranch writer on 15-Jan-2023
    Hugs across the miles