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Carelessness that causes devastation
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Comment from
PoemsOfDD
This is a good entry for the 5 line poem contest.
All syllables are in check with a message to all cheating
lovers out there - think twice!
The picture is a bit spooky. The woman looks like she is
kissing a severed head... lol.
Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
Thank you for the review. I had a hard time finding even that one; lets pretend his body is behind "a curtain". LOL Thanks for the good wishes!
reply by PoemsOfDD on 13-Jan-2023
Lol - severed body behind certain. Got it. Better kiss it. Lol still. xx
Comment from
Karen Estep
I like this as it tells a story from the beginning to what may be the end all staying within the boundaries set forth for the contest! Wonderful graphic also! Good luck in this contest! Keep writing!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
Thank you for the very kind words and good wishes.
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