Brevity
A life too short6 total reviews
Comment from Karmin Kabrera
Wow!!!! 3 Lines that tells the story of many women around the world. This poem was Beautifully said and deeply heart felt. Lots of luck to you and God bless.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
Wow!!!! 3 Lines that tells the story of many women around the world. This poem was Beautifully said and deeply heart felt. Lots of luck to you and God bless.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the wonderful review and the good wishes.
Comment from Cecilia Lynne1
Emotional very moving three line poem. Well chosen piece of art to support your poem. Yes so often loved ones young and old are taken from this earth far too soon. Leaving a void that lives on forever. Forever in this life is real. Leaving heart felt memories that are often our only salvation and comfort. All the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
Emotional very moving three line poem. Well chosen piece of art to support your poem. Yes so often loved ones young and old are taken from this earth far too soon. Leaving a void that lives on forever. Forever in this life is real. Leaving heart felt memories that are often our only salvation and comfort. All the best in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the kind words and best wishes.
Comment from Nicki Nance
This is a small poem that tells a big story. The theme is global, and people with diverse experiences should be able to relate to it. I found it compelling
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
This is a small poem that tells a big story. The theme is global, and people with diverse experiences should be able to relate to it. I found it compelling
Comment Written 12-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
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thank you for your very kind words.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
In an economy of words, you speak of unspeakable loss. Not one mor word is needed to feel the poet's grief. Hauntingly beautiful. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
In an economy of words, you speak of unspeakable loss. Not one mor word is needed to feel the poet's grief. Hauntingly beautiful. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the kind words and good wishes.
Comment from Janet Foor
Life is truly brief and your 3 line poem conveys that message in a lovely way. Excellent artwork and presentation to compliment your work.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
Life is truly brief and your 3 line poem conveys that message in a lovely way. Excellent artwork and presentation to compliment your work.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 12-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a good entry for the 3 line poem contest. All syllables are in check to express an emotional piece - taken all too soon. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
This is a good entry for the 3 line poem contest. All syllables are in check to express an emotional piece - taken all too soon. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the kind words and good wishes.