Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Should "blowing few" be knowing few?

Red should have been eaten.

Always enjoy a good wolf story. They are my favorite animals.

Like he points out, he is only doing what humans do.

So, why should they not get shot "in the ass" when they do the same thing?

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023

Thank you. Yep, you're the second reviewer who caught the oops. I will edit and correct. Someone has to take the wolves side.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I didn't know wolves were so sensitive, perhaps I'll tone down my excessive criticism, when I tell these stories to my grandchildren. Maybe I'll read something a little more tame. Those Brothers Grimm have some accounting for. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Typo : it hurts (blowing) few or none...knowing?

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023

Thank you, and thanks for the catch. You're the third reviewer to point out that typo. I don't know how I missed it. I will edit and correct. Thanks again.

reply by royowen on 11-Jan-2023

Well done

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This story really did make me rethink my stance on the "big bad" wolf. After having read this, I can understand why he did what he did. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you!

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023

Thank you. I can't say as I approve of him eating Grandma and Red, but it is just a story.

Comment from April Smith

Good

I like your perspective here, giving the wolf a voice and telling his "side of the story." But I do think that maybe it's a little disjointed and doesn't flow in an easy way. I think it might have focused on one point at a time, with only humorous and short distractions. I enjoyed the distracted thoughts thrown in there and the light humor. Thank you so much for sharing this - I did really enjoy reading and I like the thoughts!

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 Comment Written 11-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023

Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

You eat babies! The little calves , and fawns, and cubs, and such. If you only picked on grown-ups....
Nicely written. Good work.
Good luck in the contest and best wishes.

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 Comment Written 11-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023

Thank you. We eat babies, too; veal, for instance, and lamb chops.

reply by Wayne Fowler on 11-Jan-2023

Maybe 'some' of us.
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