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My side of the story55 total reviews
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is so self-evident it's extraordinary. The end:
basically, I'm not a bad fellow. I'm only a wolf doing what wolves do to survive.
is pure magic. Loved every word of it. kay
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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This is so self-evident it's extraordinary. The end:
basically, I'm not a bad fellow. I'm only a wolf doing what wolves do to survive.
is pure magic. Loved every word of it. kay
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
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Thank you. It was a fun story to write. Wolf should have the right to defend himself. LOl
Comment from Olivanne Marsh
Good luck in the contest; creative POV and good, clear writing. The details made your point, although a human could point out in response that we can be made the villains too, and we are higher on the food chain...just saying. What are wolves good for? I'd certainly argue they aren't underrated as dangerous, carnivores; but they are underrated for their contributions to balance in certain ecosystems and their species loyalty and ability to work together in packs...except for the lone wolf types. All this thought after 500 well-chosen words. Good job.
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Good luck in the contest; creative POV and good, clear writing. The details made your point, although a human could point out in response that we can be made the villains too, and we are higher on the food chain...just saying. What are wolves good for? I'd certainly argue they aren't underrated as dangerous, carnivores; but they are underrated for their contributions to balance in certain ecosystems and their species loyalty and ability to work together in packs...except for the lone wolf types. All this thought after 500 well-chosen words. Good job.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
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Thank you. It is only a silly story for the contest. I wouldn't want a wolf to eat my grandmother. Lol
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Sometimes silly makes you smile and think at the same time. I call that well done. :)
Comment from Kaiku
Great job. But you`ll never eat hamburger as there is no grinder handy in the den of wolves. Great imagination and quite honestly, made me hungry for a few of the critters being described. Good luck.
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Great job. But you`ll never eat hamburger as there is no grinder handy in the den of wolves. Great imagination and quite honestly, made me hungry for a few of the critters being described. Good luck.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
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Thank you. Yep, you're right. Wolves will never eat hamberger. It is only a silly story for the contest. It was fun to write.
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You blew away the competition. Way to go.
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Thank you.
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was very clever, and I'm glad I was able to come in and read it. It made me smile when he told us of the The Three Little Pigs, I'd never thought of it like that! And the rest of the story was spot on. You certainly found a unique one here, and I think it's a winner. I must check to see if the voting has started. Well done and good luck!! :)Sandra xx
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That was very clever, and I'm glad I was able to come in and read it. It made me smile when he told us of the The Three Little Pigs, I'd never thought of it like that! And the rest of the story was spot on. You certainly found a unique one here, and I think it's a winner. I must check to see if the voting has started. Well done and good luck!! :)Sandra xx
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
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Thank you. It was a fun story to write. Of course, I wouldn't be happy if a wolf ate my grandmother.
Comment from Dan Nelson
I really enjoyed this good choice,myself I was always a fan of wile ,hoping just once he would catch that road runner.l8ke tom and jerry at least he got to catch his pray occasionally even tho he didnt get to eat it ,but this is a story about hypocrisy. The thing I don't agree on is the human perspective on wolves. It's not thier carnivorous appetite they judge the wolf but the destruction the pack can cause to thier livestock in turn thier means of money and survival
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I really enjoyed this good choice,myself I was always a fan of wile ,hoping just once he would catch that road runner.l8ke tom and jerry at least he got to catch his pray occasionally even tho he didnt get to eat it ,but this is a story about hypocrisy. The thing I don't agree on is the human perspective on wolves. It's not thier carnivorous appetite they judge the wolf but the destruction the pack can cause to thier livestock in turn thier means of money and survival
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and commenting.
Comment from Chris Davies
You've convinced me! You make a great argument for wolves with a good sense of humor too. Well written with a good picture. Wish you good luck in the contest.
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You've convinced me! You make a great argument for wolves with a good sense of humor too. Well written with a good picture. Wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
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Thank you. I thought Wolf deserved the chance to defend himself. LOL
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I think the wolf would be more acceptive if his diet consisted of road kill rather than their attacking breathing souls. They are beautiful in motion, and their pack mentality quite smart. It takes a lot to challenge a bear or a 14 point buck. Good story. Humorous, too.
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I think the wolf would be more acceptive if his diet consisted of road kill rather than their attacking breathing souls. They are beautiful in motion, and their pack mentality quite smart. It takes a lot to challenge a bear or a 14 point buck. Good story. Humorous, too.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
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Thank you. It is only a silly strory for the contest. I had fun writing it.
Comment from Siliziwe Bonda
Wow wow wow I kept saying true all the way reading this, because for some reason there is some truth in this because why do we think we are better why do think we're not evil... Is it because we don't kill animals the same way animals kill animals to eat them, but however we're all killers and we should be seen as that. We are the same, wow
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Wow wow wow I kept saying true all the way reading this, because for some reason there is some truth in this because why do we think we are better why do think we're not evil... Is it because we don't kill animals the same way animals kill animals to eat them, but however we're all killers and we should be seen as that. We are the same, wow
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
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Thnak you. I thought the wolf deserved the chance to defend himself.Lol
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
I never thought about it like that but that point of view certainly does
provide food for thought.
Cleverly written with clarity and focus.
Blessings
Shirley
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I never thought about it like that but that point of view certainly does
provide food for thought.
Cleverly written with clarity and focus.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
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Thank you. Wolf deserves the chance to defend himself. I had fun writing the story. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from DeboraDyess
Alright, Woplfie, you're right! We do love our meat. :)
Cute tale, aptly told. I love the bit about the grandma not feeding a poor, starving animal. It made me smile.
Best in the contest!
Blessings,
Deb
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Alright, Woplfie, you're right! We do love our meat. :)
Cute tale, aptly told. I love the bit about the grandma not feeding a poor, starving animal. It made me smile.
Best in the contest!
Blessings,
Deb
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
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Thank You. Yep, that's what she got for turning away a poor starving wolf. Lol.
