Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Well, your structural writing is always on point. I think you probably know you are moving at warp speed and skipping legal steps and stereotyping your characters. If that works for you, then continue. I do wish you luck. I know your FanStory fans will love it.

Alan stood. "That's correct, Your Honor." As he sat, he muttered under his breath, "Like I'd get a fair trial in this hick town."

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 Comment Written 10-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023

Those are Alan's thoughts and in small towns courts work differently. You said I moved at warp speed but another reviewer thought I went to slow. LOL It's hard to please everyone. Thank you for the kind review.

reply by lancellot on 10-Jan-2023

I mean, small or large, county district courts have legal procedures, felony cases have steps before a case gets to where you are. If you want to skip those, like a Law and Order episode, that's your choice. But, it may be presented to you later.

reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023

I will consider that.