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Poetry that is different.
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Comment from
barbara.wilkey
Again, thank you for sharing this saga with us. I am enjoying reading as I'm sure others are.
Yes, but fo to my health and current situation. (fo to????)
Yes, thatmy life will never again be the same until.. (that my & ellipse ...)
I tried my best to count the them but even my sheep can't sleep? (omit 'the')
Comment Written 07-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023
Well thanks Barbara I did correct those items you suggested there was several other Grammar Errors.
I talk most of my work into the phone after I write it down and then I normally edit it.
This was written on the bus coming to Atlantic City where I'm at now and I just had time to get the first posted and second one titled.
Plus I was receiving phone calls from a friend who was kind of pestering me!
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from
JT traveller
"it's blurred and confusion", such pertinent words. Perhaps you are going insane but it makes for great prose. We are all confused at this time and place in the world.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
To conquer RSV which is a highly contagious and upper respiratory disease.
Mainly transmitted by children.
And unfortunately, turning into bronchitis.
Yes, and possible pneumonia.
And then shortly later.
Contracting the newest
Covid-19 Variant-2 Pandemic Crisis.
(Death by Consumption)
You come to realize that we're all mortal and death follows very closely.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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