Heart Crafted Poems - 2023
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Spring has sprung"Musing of an old man
27 total reviews
Comment from jake cosmos aller
a nice mediation on spring, and the hope that the season brings after a cold and dark winter of despair and gloomy feelings. It is always good to reflect that the spring will come again soon.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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a nice mediation on spring, and the hope that the season brings after a cold and dark winter of despair and gloomy feelings. It is always good to reflect that the spring will come again soon.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Jake, thanks doe your review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I liked how you made the season of spring almost like a temptress. Teasing you with lighter breezes, longer days. The bee teasing the clover was a nice touch. I really enjoyed reading your poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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I liked how you made the season of spring almost like a temptress. Teasing you with lighter breezes, longer days. The bee teasing the clover was a nice touch. I really enjoyed reading your poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 07-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Gretchen, thank you for your validation words.
Comment from Faith Williams
I love the imagery of the first two line, the calendar pages 'whistling by' 'carried by the winds.' And the sun 'teasing' us with its rays. Love how you continue with the idea in the first two lines with 'calendar pages fluttered.'
Thanks for sharing your lovely spring poem, and best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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I love the imagery of the first two line, the calendar pages 'whistling by' 'carried by the winds.' And the sun 'teasing' us with its rays. Love how you continue with the idea in the first two lines with 'calendar pages fluttered.'
Thanks for sharing your lovely spring poem, and best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Thank you,Faith 🙏
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem gives strong images of how Winter tries to hold on and fights Spring. It describes how you finally know Spring will stay.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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This poem gives strong images of how Winter tries to hold on and fights Spring. It describes how you finally know Spring will stay.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 07-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Thanks for the good wishes Joan! 🙏
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You?re welcome
Joan
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Beautiful poem, heartwarming and filled with the hope of an early spring!! If only all springs would respect that March 21st date!!! Well done!!
Mario
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Beautiful poem, heartwarming and filled with the hope of an early spring!! If only all springs would respect that March 21st date!!! Well done!!
Mario
Comment Written 07-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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It hope so, as well! Thank you.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao !,
It is not easy to write about Spring without using words like blossom rain flower but you were very inventive and penned a delightful poem.
Skillfully, you wrote about the many changes that Spring slowly brings and I liked the last stanza where you mention the Ides of March ( Giulio Cesare is one of my all-time favourite historical figures).
Where I live the weather has gone haywire ...yesterday it was 14C and some trees are starting to blossom. There is no snow on the mountains ..it feels Springtime..not good.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Ciao !,
It is not easy to write about Spring without using words like blossom rain flower but you were very inventive and penned a delightful poem.
Skillfully, you wrote about the many changes that Spring slowly brings and I liked the last stanza where you mention the Ides of March ( Giulio Cesare is one of my all-time favourite historical figures).
Where I live the weather has gone haywire ...yesterday it was 14C and some trees are starting to blossom. There is no snow on the mountains ..it feels Springtime..not good.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much, so sorry to read that you are experiencing radical temperature this time of year. Be well!
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Ciao! You have 4 votes now!
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I am quite grateful for your vote. I thought for a while I would miss the boat on this one 😒
Comment from Frank Malley
For people who live in four-season sections of our Earth, the arrival of spring is always a renewing joy. "Spring has sprung" (which is a line in a number of songs) is a poem that makes again this essential celebration of having a tilted planet; and having again the fantastic opportunity of seeing the profound change that spring brings to the world of living things.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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For people who live in four-season sections of our Earth, the arrival of spring is always a renewing joy. "Spring has sprung" (which is a line in a number of songs) is a poem that makes again this essential celebration of having a tilted planet; and having again the fantastic opportunity of seeing the profound change that spring brings to the world of living things.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Yes friend, we love our four seasons!
Comment from Kaiku
Good stuff. Makes me yearn for a quick return of Lady Spring dressed in flowers and such. Oops, I used flower, but this is a review. See what you did with your excellent poem?
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Good stuff. Makes me yearn for a quick return of Lady Spring dressed in flowers and such. Oops, I used flower, but this is a review. See what you did with your excellent poem?
Comment Written 07-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Kaiku, smiles beaming back, thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your praise of spring and March is a long way off yet, but I shall look forward to it. Your poem had me all excited about spring here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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I enjoyed your praise of spring and March is a long way off yet, but I shall look forward to it. Your poem had me all excited about spring here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Eternal Muse
This has some terrific spring imagery and the visuals are so amazing I feel like I am right there, at the scene, inhaling the aroma of spring.
Excellent word choices and I compliment your artistic presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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This has some terrific spring imagery and the visuals are so amazing I feel like I am right there, at the scene, inhaling the aroma of spring.
Excellent word choices and I compliment your artistic presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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EM, I appreciate your thoughtfulness.
