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Quiet Lawyer

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Can a broken heart be mended?

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Comment from Ben Colder
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Wow. I am reading a book written by a lady named Barbara Wilky She is a former teacher and an outstanding writer. I have promised to let my daughter read it and her staff of nurses. Who knows you could see an increase in sales. LOL.
Have a great year, Barb.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
    I would love to get an increase in sales. Thank you for all your support.
reply by Ben Colder on 06-Jan-2023
    I am trying to get my daughter hooked on your writing. She works with a lot of women.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
    I bet you can. You have a way....
Comment from BethShelby
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I enjoyed this chapter. The relationship is making progress if that is even possible. I think in might have be love at first between these two. Gread chapter. I hear today is is you birthday or maybe yesterday. Happy Birthday. I hope it is going well.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
    Thank you for the birthday wishes. My prayer is you have a blessed 2023. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from eliz100
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This is another excellent chapter. You moved the story along nicely. I look forward to the next installment. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jay Squires
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You do know, don't you, that no matter how scrumptious your second chapter of the week is, I'll only have a five to award it, right? Their relationship is indeed deepening. I know you'll bring it to its natural conclusion before it becomes too much romance without the corresponding tension. I know you'll do that. I have faith in you.

Jay

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
    Thank you for the kind review. I think you might be surprised what happens, at least I hope so.
Comment from royowen
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A lovely slow episode, a chance to gain one's perspective on this great story. The fact that Ali is getting better, and like young people heal very quickly is a miracle within itself, a wonderful post my friend, well done Barbara, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
    Thank you for the kind review. The next post is the trail about Alan.
reply by royowen on 05-Jan-2023
    Well done
Comment from Sankey
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Sorry, the SIXES have run out. Say a Virtual SIX as usual. This was a nice bonus as well. You normally don't post middle of the week. Love the romance in here. Love the picture as well. No spags.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
    I'm posting every five days until this novel ends. It won't be long. I'll post the next post on 1/10/23. Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Sankey on 05-Jan-2023
    That's great! I meant to say, would Ali be well enough to be in the court at the ex's arraignment so the court etc can see what he has done to her?
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
    They will see exactly what's done to her. It is the next post.
reply by Sankey on 05-Jan-2023
    Good!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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A wonderful caring story. I like the idea how you gradually get into the romantic part of a courtship. You go slow with the courtship and soon we'll learn more of them in the next chapter.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
    Thank you fo the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
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I'm so pleased for you, Barbara that this book is already finished and then you have another one ready to be released. One chapter a week is what I can manage to write.
I have no six left, I'm sorry. Too late in the week.
Well, I suppose what we will soon hear the church bells ringing. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
    It will be a while and there are some problems that need to solved. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Anne Johnston
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I have not been on here much the last while. I have read most of your chapters but haven't had time to do much reviewing. The story is progressing well, Happy New Year to you.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
    Thank you for the kind review. I've missed you. I hope all is well.
reply by Anne Johnston on 05-Jan-2023
    Yes, I am fine, have been away a lot visiting family, and don't like doing anything on FS on my IPad.
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
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The relationship between Ali and Cord is developing. The writer is handling this with sensitivity. No wonder Cord is popular with the ladies-
good-looking and chivalrous!

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
    Thank you for the kind review. Cord is most women's dream. He does have a few faults.