Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from jmdg1954
You made a good segway from girls talk through to the dinner and a little alone time on the "talking bench".
You have a nice simple stroke to your writing, which I like.
I'm also looking forward to :
Sean told me this afternoon that Griffin's trial is one o'clock Wednesday."
Nicely done. John
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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You made a good segway from girls talk through to the dinner and a little alone time on the "talking bench".
You have a nice simple stroke to your writing, which I like.
I'm also looking forward to :
Sean told me this afternoon that Griffin's trial is one o'clock Wednesday."
Nicely done. John
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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My next post will be Griffin's trial. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
I'm so glad they are now officially a couple. Great job as always. Your characters are realistic, and one could think this was a real thing happening. Waiting for more, as always. Enjoy your afternoon. Shirley
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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I'm so glad they are now officially a couple. Great job as always. Your characters are realistic, and one could think this was a real thing happening. Waiting for more, as always. Enjoy your afternoon. Shirley
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lavendermoon14
Great chapter! I love the way that the characters have all developed throughout the course of the plot. You have a talent for adding depth to your works in a way that many romance novels especially tend to lack. Excellent job!
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Great chapter! I love the way that the characters have all developed throughout the course of the plot. You have a talent for adding depth to your works in a way that many romance novels especially tend to lack. Excellent job!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Seems Alexandra let loose somewhat and had fun with the ladies.
Now they are officially an exclusive couple, this Big City lawyer and her cowboy sweetheart.
Fireworks are bound to follow.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Seems Alexandra let loose somewhat and had fun with the ladies.
Now they are officially an exclusive couple, this Big City lawyer and her cowboy sweetheart.
Fireworks are bound to follow.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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I can promise issues will arise. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
I like this chapter; orderly and expressive taletelling and the dialogues are so realistic; I have enjoyed the read; the evaluation of character has been practicable and there is good flow of thoughts on the whole; well said, ALCREATOR LITT DEAR 06/01/2023
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I like this chapter; orderly and expressive taletelling and the dialogues are so realistic; I have enjoyed the read; the evaluation of character has been practicable and there is good flow of thoughts on the whole; well said, ALCREATOR LITT DEAR 06/01/2023
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
at least enough the barn will be serviceable - enough SO the
I wanted you to have something to look forward too - change too to to (lol, didn't mean to have so many!)
What an interesting comment about not having girlfriends. It's something I can't understand because I always did, but I realize not every woman does. That's too bad, as a good girlfriend can help you to get through both good and bad times.
A nice continuation to their romance.
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at least enough the barn will be serviceable - enough SO the
I wanted you to have something to look forward too - change too to to (lol, didn't mean to have so many!)
What an interesting comment about not having girlfriends. It's something I can't understand because I always did, but I realize not every woman does. That's too bad, as a good girlfriend can help you to get through both good and bad times.
A nice continuation to their romance.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the help. I have made the changes.
Comment from lancellot
Another well crafted chapter. I suspect they would set a wedding date by now. I would say that Cord has amazing will power for a man his age. Too amazing, but it's your style.
"It's amazing how a big city lawyer can be so innocent."
- I keep saying the same thing. Protected? That doesn't seem to be the case if she was abused, and they did nothing, even after the party
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Another well crafted chapter. I suspect they would set a wedding date by now. I would say that Cord has amazing will power for a man his age. Too amazing, but it's your style.
"It's amazing how a big city lawyer can be so innocent."
- I keep saying the same thing. Protected? That doesn't seem to be the case if she was abused, and they did nothing, even after the party
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Nobody knew she was abused. Thank you for the review.
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is a great chapter, Barbara. Ali is still on the mend, and I'm sure with Cord's help will make a full recovery. Cord and Ali are beginning to warm up, and I'm happy they've decided to become a couple. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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This is a great chapter, Barbara. Ali is still on the mend, and I'm sure with Cord's help will make a full recovery. Cord and Ali are beginning to warm up, and I'm happy they've decided to become a couple. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Congratulations, Barbara, it sounds like your done with your book and working on your publishing process. It's a lot of work.
Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Congratulations, Barbara, it sounds like your done with your book and working on your publishing process. It's a lot of work.
Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from amahra
Ok, so I guess from the scene of their sitting on the bench star-watching was Alexandra's way of letting Cord know she was a virgin? I've forgotten some facts at the beginning of the story, so I don't remember how old she is. Not that it matters...just curious.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Ok, so I guess from the scene of their sitting on the bench star-watching was Alexandra's way of letting Cord know she was a virgin? I've forgotten some facts at the beginning of the story, so I don't remember how old she is. Not that it matters...just curious.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Yes, the already had the virgin talk in New York City. Thank you for the kind review.
